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[Bleach] Setting Sun, Rising Moon (7/12)

Sep 21, 2007 15:40

Title: Setting Sun, Rising Moon (part 7 of 12)
Rating: PG for this chapter
Word Count: 4,766
Summary: Half a century ago, Ichigo became a substitute shinigami while he was still alive. At the end of that life, it's time to become the real thing, but with death comes unexpected challenges-not the least of which is that presented by seeing Rukia ( Read more... )

ichigo/rukia, rukia, ikkaku, ichigo, unohana, setting sun rising moon, bleach

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annieroo2 September 21 2007, 20:27:42 UTC

LOL. Ikkaku? I really loved that Ichigo asked Ikkaku for help. It's so him, but Ikkaku's almost as oblivious as Ichigo. LOL. Maybe Ichigo should get some back up advice from Yumichika or Yachiru, someone who actually notices what's going on around them. LOL I really loved that part. The rest is so full of angst. I can't wait until they finally get together in the end. But a nice bumpy ride on the way is just as much fun. Thanks for sharing.

jaina September 27 2007, 15:58:32 UTC

Thanks for commenting! :D He went to Ikkaku because Ikkaku's friends with them both and would know what happened, and Ichigo doesn't have to feel bad about pushing him around. ;)

loveotter September 21 2007, 20:30:33 UTC

Eeeeeee still so good. Ichigo getting all freaked out over Rukia was sweet, and when he had a "doctor" moment--I found that really hot for some reason. XD Also trying to picture Ichigo older and with a few strands of gray, that's kind of hot too. I see he has changed little in his middle age, hee hee. XD Can't wait to see how you're gonna get these sillypoos back together.

jaina September 27 2007, 15:59:09 UTC

Thanks you sweets <3 I know I'd play doctor with Ichigo!

sleepingfingers September 21 2007, 20:42:03 UTC

This is really good. I love Rukia-on-medicine. :)

jaina September 27 2007, 16:03:09 UTC

Thanks! I had fun writing her on medicine.

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jaina September 27 2007, 16:05:07 UTC

Woot! I get future babies!

Thank you very much. :D The integration of Ichigo is as much a part of the story as the romance. Originally it was going to be more about that side of things...but it turned out to not be so interesting. :D

What songs do you listen to?

wicked_liz September 21 2007, 21:39:42 UTC

This was so moving. It's so like them to have to indirectly stumble upon actually revealing their true thoughts to each other.

My chest got all tight, and I could feel my heart in my throat at the end there, but no tears!! So HAHA!!!! You have yet to make me cry.

As usual the pacing is uber effective, u manage simultaneous storylines that manage to be relevant to each other, but u don't blur them or make them confusing. That's great story-telling there.

As the Yeah Yeah Yeahs would say "there ain't no modern romance"

jaina September 27 2007, 16:05:50 UTC

Thank you! Hmm, maybe I'll succeed in a future chapter. ;)