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[Bleach] Setting Sun, Rising Moon (1/12)

Jul 16, 2007 11:40

Title: Setting Sun, Rising Moon (part 1 of 12)
Rating: PG-13 for this chapter
Word Count: 4,219
Summary: Half a century ago, Ichigo became a substitute shinigami while he was still alive. At the end of that life, it's time to become the real thing, but with death comes unexpected challenges-not the least of which is that presented by seeing Rukia ( Read more... )

zangetsu, rukia, ichigo, byakuya, setting sun rising moon, bleach

Comments 54

overtoned July 16 2007, 16:51:37 UTC

OH ho ho, that was marvelous. :]

jaina July 17 2007, 22:15:51 UTC

<3 Thank you very much! I hope the next chapters are agreeable as well.

scathachdhu July 16 2007, 17:05:24 UTC

Ah, I hadn't read all of this part. I do like this; Ichigo and Rukia are still themselves while having matured over the years. And "bored and better than you" is Bya in a nutshell. And I'm proud of you for finishing! Involved multi-chapters are harder than they seem.

jaina July 17 2007, 22:18:48 UTC

I do keep things secret from you, o ho ho. Well. Sometimes. "Bored and better than you" should probably be a Byakuya icon. Thank you! This is my first one, so it's a learning experience. (I learned: DON'T DO THAT. Well, don't do that and expect it not to take forever.)

lendra_chan July 16 2007, 17:08:23 UTC

Oh that's really cute. xD I was a little scared at first, seeing that the opening link was 'Ichigo died' and I was afraid to find it a sob story.

But I was pleasantly surprised! :D I really like it so far! It only gives you just enough information to keep you begging for more~!

Can't wait to chapter 2! <3

jaina July 17 2007, 22:19:52 UTC

Heeee. It's not a sob story...yet, anyway. ;) I'm glad you like!

anonymous July 16 2007, 17:22:31 UTC

Now I'm really excited for the second chapter!

jaina July 17 2007, 22:22:59 UTC

Thanks, anonymouse! I hope you like it.

loveotter July 16 2007, 17:30:43 UTC

YAAAAAAAAAAAAY Dead Ichigo!!!

It's wonderful thus far, very enjoyable, as I expected it would be, of course. <3 I love the Ichi/Ruki banter and Bya-chan being Bya-chan, and Zangetsu's random appearance was great. XD Oh, and Ichigo's lingering grumpy-old-manness. Can't wait to see more!

jaina July 17 2007, 22:24:22 UTC

^_____^ Thanks so much! Ichigo just seems like he'd fit the grumpy old man thing pretty well. And Zangetsu...you know he likes to watch.