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[hephapsantamod]

Title: There Goes My Hero
For: maudlinsky
Pairing: Jiho/Taeil; Minhyuk/Jihoon/Kyung
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~7,600
Summary: Jiho is a paragon of heroic justice and Kyung is his archnemesis, and their sidekicks are helpful, sometimes, when they aren’t being incredibly useless or secretly dating each other.

Comments

[maudlinsky]

OMG! just let me get some thoughts together (maybe a bit of my sanity)...

i love jiho in this. even though he is the leader and super strong and super fast (which is exactly how i saw it, btw), he is such a boy and unsure! he moved his hand away from taeil's when they walked the bike over to taeil's place. and jiho standing outside the bakery like a creepster just so he can see taeil. and later, he straight up tells taeil that he wants to hop on the back of his bike and cruise. and i love that! this is how i see them, where taeil is the man and jiho is stripped from his confidence because he wants taeil. and he wants to be someone taeil wants, and taeil is like, whatevs. I LOVE YOU FOREVER FOR BRINGING ME TAECO!! ♥

[maudlinsky]

so, santa anon, you are about to experience all of me completely unfiltered.

first things first, i apologize if you had any trouble writing this because i suck at prompts and like the strangest boys together. i thought going into this no one would write my b-sides and rarities pairings but otps are otps. love cannot be stopped! that being said, i almost had a heart attack when i saw the pairings! I LOVE TAECO!!!! and you also wrote minhyuk+jihoon+kyung (idk what to call them) but it's my ot3. and you made them so hot and lovely and real. and you wrote so much. and you combined two of my prompts and they were the ones i wanted the most! and taeil wasn't a baby or pining away over jiho. you made taeil the badass i know he is and jiho is so protective of him. and i almost cried over the summary alone. because this is just what i wanted.

[maudlinsky]

NOW LET'S TALK ABOUT THE FIC ITSELF!!! =D

i may or may not have loved the first line to the point of gushing over IM. and the last line. kwon breaking the microwave?! those boys have so many problems and maybe they shouldn't have super powers but they are flawless. i like that they aren't cookie-cutter heroes. like they have really terrible powers. and jaehyo the card shark! the cards are all bent and worthless but he tries and i love him so much. and kwon is going to get caught one day by some zoo patrol officers (?) and find himself in a pen with a super lovely lady monkey.

[maudlinsky]

i loved minhyuk in this, like i always love him but he was sooo good in this! and he keeps going to see kyung even though kyung abandoned them. but i like the way you wrote it out to be, that kyung left because of jiho. it wasn't anyone else. what really won me over was how you wrote that kyung never attacks minhyuk, doesn't even try. that was something that really helped their dynamic and it was just a blurb but it meant so much. kyung left minhyuk there as a way of going back, like he's torn between who he wants to be and who he has become. and that sound really intense but it is glorious. and kyung is a stylish villain with awesome powers.

[maudlinsky]

jihoon stays in contact with minhyuk because it's love, i tell you. PYOBOMB! i think i'm going to marry you! pyobomb having sexy times and denting up bed frames and probably other parts of the base. kyung walking in on them having sexy times. omg! and then kyung eats cake nonstop to keep his mind off it, because kyung knows what he's missing. and kyung needs to make up with minhyuk soon so sexy times for all! but minhyuk being so nonchalant about everything. and kyung and jihoonie looking for piranha-infested moats on the internet! aksdjfaidjfkajkdjgakgjasdksjk perfecto, my dear santa. you are superb!