Fic: Out of Focus (Ten, Donna) [G]

[hence_the_name]

Title: Out of Focus
Characters: Ten, Donna
Rating: G
Beta: nightrider101, always a star.
Spoilers: 4x10, "Midnight"
Summary: Some more of the Doctor's introspection and missing scene filler for the end of "Midnight"

Comments

[nightrider101]

He pressed his cheek against her hair and closed his eyes. Everything felt out of focus, harsh and too bright, but the warm solidity of her body anchored him, the softness of her terry-cloth robe and the scent of shampoo in her hair letting him know he was well and truly back in this world. He let out a breath he didn’t know he had been holding.

Did you hear my massive fangirl squee? It was pretty loud. The dog actually had to come in and check on me. ;)

But this time, his silence was his own.

Oh, wow. Simply gorgeous! Such a powerful ending to that amazing episode!

[hence_the_name]

I was wondering what that noise was... :P

Thanks again for the suggestions. I knew there was something missing from that paragraph--I'm much happier with it now. :) And I'm glad you liked the last line, too!

Thanks for the review! You rock!

[dreamsofoctober]

This is AMAZING. No it's more then amazing it's supazitastic! Yes, new word just for you, but that's it. Wow. Chills, I had CHILLS! Really, really really good. Thanks for sharing.

[hence_the_name]

Thank you! And ooh look, a shiny new word! How appropriate. ;)

I'm glad you enjoyed this so much!

[dreamsofoctober]

I just wanted you to know that I went and read most of your stuff on Tea Spoon. And, well supazitastic. All of it. I loved it all. Seriously. Amazing, AMAZING, work. Wow. But I wanted you to know how much I liked your stuff.

[hence_the_name]

Oh, wow, thank you! I'm glad you liked it all, and many thanks for letting me know! :) I always figure that more people are reading than are actually commenting, but it's always nice to hear. So thanks! :D

[charamei]

Just came over from dwfiction and have read both this and Not Weapons, Just Words in one go. These are both wonderful; you've caught Ten perfectly and your writing is evocative - in fact, it's succeeded in moving me where the episode itself failed.

[hence_the_name]

Oh, wow, high praise indeed! Thank you. :) I loved this episode and was quite moved by it--I'm glad I could communicate some of that in these pieces. Thanks for commenting!

[ascendant_angel]

This was really good, I mean really, really good. You have much talent.

[hence_the_name]

Thank you!

[supasass]

A lovely ficlet about their friendship, sweet and poignant and warming. I can't get enough of their partnerhship and I'm gonna be gutted when it ends.
xx

[hence_the_name]

Thanks! I love their friendship too...I'm just hoping the end leaves room for them to see each other again...