[Fic] Dance

[helzfyah]

Title: Dance

Author: helzfyah

Pairing: Hanchul… actually it’s Heechul/unspecified, if you prefer to see it that way^^ (but Hannie is pretty obvious.)

Rating: PG-13

Warnings: none, really.

Summary: Dance practice. Short - 403 words.

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1.2.3 - Step.

His body flows under the pull of the music, moving with the rhythmic sounds that

Comments

[bellasurus]

Ooooooooh

I don't know much about SuJu, but I could see Hangeng dancing. Love his dancing. And it's no wonder Chullie would be turned on by it!

8D I'm sure heechul will be doing more than just washing his back. *coughs*

love!

[helzfyah]

i saw your icon and went - why is Bel mad at me? O__O *flail*

OOH thank you - you're not even SuJu obsessed cough*like me*cough and you liked it! *luffs on Bel*. And yes - Hannie dancing is teh sex, and if Rella doesn't take advantage of him, well... I have nothing to say.

Thanks for reading it!

[taylormercury]

I really like the way this came out. I love HanChul, but I never see very much of it, but this, this was very much Hannie in my mind, the dancing makes it so, really. But I liked this a lot, the little intersections with the numbers and steps, and how it fit in with each following paragraph, it was nicely done, and it was very well done for its shortness.

I liked this a lot, thanks for sharing~ :)

[helzfyah]

Aah, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I loved portraying Hannie's dancing - it's so essentially him in my mind.

And there needs to be more HanChul - Thanks for reading!

[hyperion_quest]

Now I'm not gonna say that I'd love to climb up on Hannie sprawled and sweating on the floor cause then you'd probably kill me so all I'm gonna say is that the fic was really well done, the movement is so vivid and so is the man (hehehe). The devilishness of Heechul was captured nicely too. I'm also gonna refrain from saying that I was waiting in the shower for them... with Shiwon of course.

Nice job Bri... i think it's perfect! ^_^

[helzfyah]

XD - you're lucky you decided not to say anything about Hannie and crawling,hmmm. And you wanted to have an orgy with ShiHanChul in the bathroom? - you bad girl!!

I'm glad you enjoyed it dearie - thanks for giving it a look over in the first place!
♥

[helzfyah]

Glad you enjoyed it :D

I am Jealous

[mollysixx]

I am Jealous, everybody else wrote something before me so I am going to write something even though I haven't read the story as yet, and then when I am finished reading it, I shall write yet another comment :D

I LOVE HEECHUL, he's so hot, and I love Bri's writing, it's exciting, entertaining and so funny. *sigh, well off to read it now, just saying, I THINK BRI AND HER STORIES ARE COOL!!

Re: I am Jealous

[helzfyah]

Woot - you're like my own personal fangirl *huggles Molly* I can't buy this kind of happy XD.

lol - now stop deluding yourself - yes Rella is hot on a stick, but my writing doesn't do him justice :p

♥