[Fic] Conversations in a ruined apartment.

[helzfyah]

Title: Conversations in a ruined apartment

Author: helzfyah

Pairing: ShiChul.

Rating: PG-13 for adult references, I guess.

Summary: Inspired by this comment Heechul made about the fire in his building. It was supposed to simply be a story about moving in together - but it evolved on me. And I know next to nothing about the details of the fire,

Comments

[fahrenheit]

First?!

“That was before you decided to tell her I’ve been giving you personal lessons on how to insert tab A into slot B.”
*snort*

I liked it. I'm not much a ShiChul person, so feel proud :3~ It rubbed off in a good way on me

[helzfyah]

*feels proud*
Thanks for giving it a chance although it's not your usual thing - and i love that line too :p

Glad you liked it ♥

[attizzikah]

this has a really feel good vibe to it; i really like it, and i'm jealous that you write heechul so well (i... fail, at writing heechul x_x) but that's neither here nor there!
lovely job :D

[helzfyah]

I'm glad you enjoyed it - writing Heechul is hard, I really think, so i'm glad you thought i came close *is not too sure*. Reading his blog obsessively helped i believe :p

Thanks for reading! ♥

[coyotecolored]

Aww... this is really adorable and sweet xD I like that you've touched on public/family reactions to something like this... that's a bit uncommon in fanfiction sometimes, it seems. The whole piece has a really gentle, smooth mood to it, despite the destruction/chaos of the setting they're in.

[helzfyah]

XD I'm glad you liked this... the family angle came absolutely out of nowhere and I just thought "why didn't I think of that in the first place?" and it went on from there.

Thanks for reading ♥

[helzfyah]

XD Thank you! ♥

[gero_gero]

Waa!! I love this fic!!
It's so sweet~

“You’re dropping me off at the hostel,” he says, reaching up to stop Shiwon’s protests with a finger. “Then you’re going to have a very long talk with your mother. And we’ll see what happens tomorrow.”
Shiwon’s smile is almost blinding in its intensity. He glances out the door, inspecting the hallway before catching Heechul’s lips in a deep, bruising kiss. He is still smiling when they eventually break apart

This part is my favourite =P
Silly Shiwon and domineering Heechul
it's so real xD

[helzfyah]

*loves on your icon* is that Jin? OMG I love him like nothing else...

Glad you liked it! Heechul has Shiwonnie wrapped around his little finger - i'm positive.

Thanks for reading ♥

[gero_gero]

Yep, it's Jin 8P

I can't change my icon because lj hates me, but I don't care because it's always Jin xD