[Fic] Close to Perfect

Jun 10, 2007 22:07

Title: Close to perfect

Author: helzfyah

Pairing: Kangteuk

Rating: PG for boy kissing

Genre: happy fluff

Summary: a short little thing, less than 500 words. Backstage of the Seoul Dream Concert.

***

The band exits stage left, passing Dong Bang Shin Ki as they wait to be announced. Backstage is pure chaos; coordis are running around ( Read more... )

suju, kangteuk, fic: close to perfect, fic

Leave a comment

Comments 28

elvenyounglett June 11 2007, 06:07:40 UTC
aww I like your Kangteuk! The whole part of Eeteuk's laughter carrying on into their kisses was adorable. Your writing is so pretty!

And HA! at Shindong getting thrown in there xD

This fic makes me happy. Thanks for sharing! ^_^

Reply

helzfyah June 11 2007, 17:44:57 UTC
XD
thanks so much! I'm glad i could make you happy^^

Reply


jaded_skys June 11 2007, 07:45:48 UTC
*dies from how sweet it is*

So much love for this! You don't even know~!! ♥ Absolutely perfect!

Reply

helzfyah June 11 2007, 17:45:58 UTC
*revives*

lol, too much sugar is bad for you? I'M QUITE GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT XD

Reply


swtjemz June 11 2007, 15:00:42 UTC
*FLAILS* SO CUTE. SO CUTE SO CUTE SO CUTE SO CUTE OMG I WANT TO CUDDLE THEM SO MUCH. AND KANGIN BEING ALL SWEET AND EETUEK ALL SAPPY AND EMOTIONAL AND SHINDONG. SHINDONG IS JUST SO FUNNY.

He places his hands on Eeteuk’s waist - still careful how-many weeks later - as Eeteuk kisses him, his laughter spilling over into Kangin’s mouth.

AND I REALLY, REALLY LIKE THIS SENTENCE A LOT.

His arms slide under Eeteuk’s thighs as he attempts to swing his legs up around him, and they almost fall to the floor when the slippery fabric of their new costumes slides against each other. Kangin spins and places Eeteuk to sit against the edge of the table, legs still wrapped around his waist, still connected at the mouth.

FEEL FREE TO CONTINUE THIS PLEASE. KTHX.

*___________________________*

Reply

helzfyah June 11 2007, 17:50:13 UTC
*flails with you*
WE ALL KNOW KANGIN'S A BIG SOFTIE UNDERNEATH ALL THAT VIOLENCE, ESPECIALLY WHEN IT COMES TO EETEUK. AND EETEUK ♥ SO HAPPY HE'S BACK, OMG.

AND WHO DOESN'T LOVE SHINDONG? HE IS SO MUCH WIN!

I'm so glad you like it! ^_______________________^

and we'll see about more, maybe^^.

Reply


tsubon June 11 2007, 17:01:39 UTC
Oooh, that was ♥. Short and simple, but very fulfilling. There were a lot of little phrases that I liked. And ShinDong, lol, I don't think the fangirls would mind if they came out nekkid. XD

Reply

helzfyah June 11 2007, 17:53:35 UTC
Thank you! *hugs*

And they cant go on stage nekkid! not that i would mind. :O - Think of the children!!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up