jaychul and horella are both ♥ so it wins either way^^.
The drama line is one of my faves XD and Hannie'll just have to buy a new pair of shades the way that Rella is whoring them out to all comers *is shot*
But I loved this a lot! It was written so nicely, and some of the discriptions were just... wow. Though I loved the whole thing- the ending pretty much made my life. <3 You're pretty much awesome.
You're so gracious with your thank you's and glad you liked it's ^^
I love the title lemme just say: so correct. I think this is the smuttiest thing I've read of yours. You should you know, maybe go write some serious smut one time, just for the sake.
The you's and he's were a bit up and down at the start but once you get settled into the rhythm it smooths out. I'm kinda thinking that third person would have been better suited but then you might have given away the "You" so I get why you didn't use it.
Again, the interaction was so PERFECT, and the touching!! OMG the touching! I wanna write and ode to the touching (and you know how i feel about certain things)I love how you wrote Rella's movements and how they were all kinda focused on his hands cause Rella has pretty, elegant hands
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The title - dude, i pull my titles out of the story itself. I have NO IDEA what to title things. Ever.
And Smut... cannot write. Smutty I can do. Smut - No. (and click the yoosu tag, it's smuttier^^). I'm afraid I wont do it well (yes, even with all my... research). I'll leave smut to the veterans for now. But i love to write smutty heechul. Or Jae. I shall write more at some time.
Hmm... must look over my pronouns. And it's in 2nd person because all the 'he's' in third person are way to confusing. Also, i wanted to write it as someobe looking at Rella, so i tried to get more personal with it. Did it work?
The touchie! OMG - you KNOW i fangirl Rella's hands like whoa! I think that's one of my fave parts. Rella touching - mmm mmm mmm - i'm lovin' it.
And Hannie would like to express his thank you's for your kind words^^.
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I like JayChul better than HoRella (though I LOVE both) so I'm going to go with that one as being the pairing v^-^
I cracked up at the drama line bit. ♥ loved it.
And xD poor Hannie. Now not only does Chul steal his shades, he steals them and gives them to Jay/Ho going back to Japan. lawl.
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The drama line is one of my faves XD and Hannie'll just have to buy a new pair of shades the way that Rella is whoring them out to all comers *is shot*
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But I loved this a lot! It was written so nicely, and some of the discriptions were just... wow. Though I loved the whole thing- the ending pretty much made my life. <3 You're pretty much awesome.
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thank you^^, the end was one of my fave parts to write, so i'm glad you enjoyed it.
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<3<3<3
thanx for the fic!!
love it!!
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Thank you^^!
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I love the title lemme just say: so correct.
I think this is the smuttiest thing I've read of yours. You should you know, maybe go write some serious smut one time, just for the sake.
The you's and he's were a bit up and down at the start but once you get settled into the rhythm it smooths out. I'm kinda thinking that third person would have been better suited but then you might have given away the "You" so I get why you didn't use it.
Again, the interaction was so PERFECT, and the touching!! OMG the touching! I wanna write and ode to the touching (and you know how i feel about certain things)I love how you wrote Rella's movements and how they were all kinda focused on his hands cause Rella has pretty, elegant hands ( ... )
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The title - dude, i pull my titles out of the story itself. I have NO IDEA what to title things. Ever.
And Smut... cannot write. Smutty I can do. Smut - No. (and click the yoosu tag, it's smuttier^^). I'm afraid I wont do it well (yes, even with all my... research). I'll leave smut to the veterans for now. But i love to write smutty heechul. Or Jae. I shall write more at some time.
Hmm... must look over my pronouns. And it's in 2nd person because all the 'he's' in third person are way to confusing. Also, i wanted to write it as someobe looking at Rella, so i tried to get more personal with it. Did it work?
The touchie! OMG - you KNOW i fangirl Rella's hands like whoa! I think that's one of my fave parts. Rella touching - mmm mmm mmm - i'm lovin' it.
And Hannie would like to express his thank you's for your kind words^^.
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it darling!
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