[Fanfic] Monster Mash 13

Mar 03, 2011 14:17

Title: Monster Mash 13

Characters: Francis, Jeanne, Gabriel, Tino, Berwald, Antonio, Alfred, various police, Arthur and Matthew.

Rating: 18

Warnings: Blood! Explosions! Implied sex! Really bloody long chapters!

Summary: Originally inspired by this. (Link to pic for those who don't have Pixiv here.) Due to popular demand, what was a oneshot has ( Read more... )

fanfiction, monster series, hetalia

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loegrian_scrawl March 3 2011, 17:13:38 UTC
PSSSSSHT
the very end made me sit there and just find myself baffled |D

See, now I want to know what would happen if Alfred met Arthur when he was a hunter >->
Would he defect back to Artie
Would he try and kill him
oooor would he just be his strange little psycho self whilst remaining a hunter?
ajaja
/totallyrootsforthefirstoption;-;

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hellzabeth March 3 2011, 18:49:28 UTC
In a good way or a bad way?

WHOOOO KNOOOOOOOWS

I guess this is something you can think about for yourself until the time when I actually get round to making a sequel? Even then they might not show up together.

Thanks for reading!

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ubermidget March 3 2011, 18:15:41 UTC
What a spectacular ending to this series, this chapter had me on the end of my seat! I really felt for Francis, no wonder he was still walking this Earth and hadn't moved on! Alfred's escape from the police was terrifying but epic! With Alfred becoming a hunter now, I wonder what would happen if he had to face off against Arthur?! (the image of Arthur and Matthew in their sunglasses made me think of them as cool spies rather than refugees). I'm so glad you finished this, and if you ever write a sequel, I will be very happy to follow it! :D

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hellzabeth March 3 2011, 18:55:01 UTC
I'm glad you liked it so much! His past was pretty traumatic, huh? I would be stuck on earth too. Alfred's escape was pretty well orchestrated, but the Hunters probably didn't intend for him to go and kill so many people, haha. (Arthur and Matthew wearing sunglasses at night makes me think of this song.) I'm glad too, I feel accomplished. 8D Thanks for reading!

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tuulensisko March 3 2011, 19:31:08 UTC
Okay, first off: You have no idea how I've been refreshing your journal these last few days/all week ( ... )

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hellzabeth March 3 2011, 19:58:03 UTC
Ahh, there you are Tuul, with your nice big comments that make me feel all appreciated ( ... )

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tuulensisko March 4 2011, 02:31:04 UTC
L-lol, most of that comment was just pointless rambling, though. xD;; But glad to help.

About the cats: really? That's something I've never heard before... I though cats were really common, since they were used to destroy vermin and all...

*sigh* I guess open endings are sort of good, but I just want to knooooow what happens next. xD

... oh god, demon!Alfred, oh why oh why oh why...

Eep. Whoah. I'm seriously going to check them out. =3=

D'aww, yeah I understand why you wouldn't want to be one. ;; Let's hope you won't attract any wank.

\o/ That's good news, not that I thought you'd stop writing or anything. xD; Still, keep it up, bb. <3

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hellzabeth March 4 2011, 17:10:09 UTC
I dunno, he'd probably not kill Arthur immediately... though who knows, Alfred is pretty unpredictable. Hahaha, I've left that deliberately open ended, for you to decide~! At least, until the sequel.

Thank you for reading and commenting! Here's to more!

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hellzabeth March 4 2011, 17:11:09 UTC
Haha, well done for catching on. |D Look forward to it! Though it may take a while~!

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