Comments | hellusbellus: One-Shot: Don't Bogart the Bottle

hellusbellus

One-Shot: Don't Bogart the Bottle

Jul 24, 2011 13:52

Hurrah for finished work!

Title: Don't Bogart the Bottle
Author: Hellus Bellus
Pairing: Oliver/Percy
Rating: R (Maybe PG-13. Swearing, mostly. No sex, but plenty of talk about it.)
Word Count: ~4900, one-shot
Warnings: Unbeta'd, a bit crack-y, dubious Brit-speak, slight AU (basically, screw Penny), it tastes like fluff sometimes
Disclaimer: I have ( Read more... )

pairing: percy/oliver, fandom: harry potter

Comments 14

cuddlebus July 24 2011, 19:56:16 UTC

awww i love this! oliver and percy as students just gets me. every. single. time.

great job! :]

hellusbellus July 24 2011, 20:18:29 UTC

Why, thank you! And thanks for being the first to review :). I'm a comment whore, I admit this. I also love the boys as students- if only for the stammering.

cuddlebus July 24 2011, 21:17:19 UTC

awww, i think we all have a little comment whore inside of us ;D and i agree! stammering, awkward!Percy/Oliver is the best kind.

pink_mariette July 25 2011, 03:39:24 UTC

The kiss was rather delicious, I will have to say. And I enjoyed reading this, so thank you for writing. I've recently fallen into the world of Percy/Oliver/Percy (however you write it) and am glad to find fiction about them as well as other people who also enjoy this pairing.

You did a wonderful job.

hellusbellus July 25 2011, 06:53:09 UTC

Thank you very much for your comments, and I'm glad you liked the story! Welcome to the ship :). If you haven't already, I really suggest you check out some of Teague's works- Dancing, in particular. I know they are some of my favorite Percy/Oliver stories. ((http://teague.0catch.com/DanceClub.html))

I'm glad you liked the kiss. Percy's got game, haha.

hellusbellus July 25 2011, 21:04:35 UTC

Oh, and since I'm playing ship-librarian, you might take a look at the Master List (if you haven't already):

http://percyoliver.pbworks.com/w/page/15820471/Master-List

Happy hunting :)

pink_mariette August 3 2011, 01:20:20 UTC

Wow, there are so many!

Thank you very much for sharing, I will be a happy girl for quite some time. :D

binarykittens July 30 2011, 12:47:22 UTC

Absolutely gorgeous! I've got to say, I do like the idea of Percy being a bit of a tart. It's delightful, and you pulled it off stunningly.

Sequel? ;D

hellusbellus August 4 2011, 15:32:16 UTC

Thank you for your kind review! I do love Percy as a bit of a, well, 'accidental' tart.

Sequel, hm? And what, pray tell, would you have happen in this sequel? **eyebrow wiggle** Haha. Well, maybe. No plans for one just at the moment, though.

binarykittens August 5 2011, 07:18:44 UTC

Haha, shall I spell it out for you? ;D

deviledneville September 4 2011, 05:02:12 UTC

AWW! totally cute. I love the idea of casanova Percy. I mean, it kinda makes sense to me that Percy would be a very considerate and diligent lover, so... of course all those girls were swooning for him!

This really leaves me wanting more! Sequal!!! *shameless begging*

hellusbellus September 4 2011, 06:19:17 UTC

Thank you for such a lovely, positive review!

I can't really imagine Percy doing anything without proper preparation and a sense of diligence. Heh. I also can't imagine him saying, "No," all that often...

Sequel? Hm. I hadn't meant to, but I just might.

Once again, thanks for the comment!

straydog733 September 14 2011, 05:42:22 UTC

This one is so wonderful, I love all the awkward boy talk and stressed-out Percy. His entrance scene is great with him "confiscating" their vodka. A wonderful fic that really gets some of the energy of Percy. I'm really glad The Quibbler Report sent me over here!

hellusbellus September 14 2011, 05:43:56 UTC

Thank you for your lovely comment! Haha, yes, I was a bit worried about the switch in Percy from confiscating to "confiscating", so I'm glad you liked it, and I'm happy that I managed to get Percy's vibe.

Thanks for the wonderful, detailed feedback :D.