Title: Scream, baby. Rating: NC-17 Pairings: Sam/Dean, Dean/Alastair Word count: ~1,700 Warnings: bottom!Dean, dub-con, blood play, abuse, hurt!Dean Summary: The four times Dean felt broken.
EEK! This was chilling and LOADED with angst and pain. While I always have trouble with fics where John deliberately beats Dean or Sam to a bloody pulp, 'cause even in a fit of rage the worst I can see John do is one, quick, thoughtless punch as opposed to him reigning down blow after blow, so while that first one I couldn't get on board with, I really loved the other three. Well done. You really set the tone and mood perfectly and really scary too.
I adored the Dark Side of the Moon coda. I don't think I've ever disliked Sam more (and he's given me more than one moment) than I did in that ep. But there was scant little fiction about how much Sam had gutted him. This captured that perfectly in so few words!
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(and the formatting is wonderful now ;)
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