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franztastisch August 10 2011, 14:28:35 UTC
OH. MY. GOD. Wha- ?

Has Albus been... dreaming about Sam... in the Pit? Or coming back? Or... I- that is... so awesome! As a plot development. Not for Albus clearly.

But.. Sam! Soulless!Sam was funny in the show but.. he was also SO depressing. Cos it's having someone being around you who looks like someone you love and acts NOTHING like them. Yet you know that it's the same person. And I think in the show you never got just how hard that must have been for Bobby and Dean. To see someone you love and know it's not them, not really. Well, at least Teddy wasn't there. That would have been even worse.

I just want to squish you for the awesome that is this story. Seriously. :D

*makes grabby hands for more*

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franztastisch August 10 2011, 14:31:09 UTC
Oh my God! And is Dean using (bad word but you know what I mean) James, Albus and Lily in the same way as he used Lucas' to find out about the spirit in Dead in the Water?

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hells_half_acre August 10 2011, 19:28:03 UTC
That is indeed partially where I got the idea ;)

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hells_half_acre August 10 2011, 19:32:38 UTC
I'm glad the depressingness of it all came through - Soulless!Sam is REALLY depressing when you think about it, and I wanted to portray that a little bit without being an angst fest.

I'm not sure what Albus has been dreaming about exactly - Harry and Ginny never asked, because they thought it was just nonsensical nightmares that kids can sometimes get...but perhaps not? Perhaps Albus has been dreaming about angels falling down slippery slopes and fire and blood.

There will be more on Monday! Actually, there will be a TON more on Monday, because I'm planning to post all remaining parts that day.

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trystan830 August 10 2011, 16:06:13 UTC
gah! awesome!

i want to know what the kids drew too!

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hells_half_acre August 10 2011, 19:27:26 UTC
Thanks :)

All will be revealed in time...(and by "in time" I mean on Monday, when I'm back from my travels).

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trystan830 August 10 2011, 19:28:19 UTC
welcome!

ahh... good to know. enjoy your travels.

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dairygirl August 10 2011, 16:49:11 UTC
As soon as Harry opened the door on the Winchesters, I thought "Why did I not realize the potential at this point in season six?" Of course when the Winchesters took care of Crowley, they could visit Harry and the family. Awesome use of Albus and his empathy/young Wizarding abilities. Harkens back to the trifecta crossover with Sherlock as well. Great portrayal of how everyone especially the kids reacted to Sam and almost wish Draco could have been involved, but that is not plausible at this point. Excellent chapter and I wonder what will happen next.

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hells_half_acre August 10 2011, 19:36:01 UTC
Thanks! As soon as I saw that episode in S6, my first thought was "oh man, now I HAVE to write a timestamp!" Hahaha...so yeah, I was basically coming up with the plot for this one since then.

I actually enjoyed the idea of psychic!Albus so much in my little trifecta crossover, that I decided to continue the theme in this one...not to the same extent of course, but I really like the idea of Albus perhaps having some abilities that his father did not.

I wish Draco could have been involved too - but sadly, keeping the characters believable means that Draco has to keep his distance.

I hope you enjoy what happens next too! I really like how I was able to weave this one together.

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katsheswims August 10 2011, 16:55:57 UTC
Great chapter!! I'm really enjoying this!

Hey, maybe with the kids clues Dean will figure out what is wrong sooner and maybe even that Cas was involved? That woyuld save lots of heartache. Though I know you don't tend to go against canon...

I wonder what the pictures are? I can't wait!

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hells_half_acre August 10 2011, 19:37:27 UTC
Yeah, it'd be nice if Harry's kids could save the day...but like you said, I do try to stick to canon - it adds an extra challenge to these crossovers that is a lot of fun for me.

I'm glad you are enjoying it! I hope you continue to do so!

And don't worry, the pictures will come into play later...

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onechairleft August 10 2011, 17:23:11 UTC
Almighty GAH!

In a good way. :)

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hells_half_acre August 10 2011, 19:37:52 UTC
Thank you! :)

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