Slayer Memories

[hello_spikey]

Well, in my poll, a continuation of "Debriefing Dana" was overwhelmingly chosen as the next thing I should work on

Comments

[rahirah]

Ooohhhhh...

[hello_spikey]

I'll take that as a good 'Ooohhhhh...'?

:D

[hunenka]

I like how you write this. With capital letters for Important Things.

I'm curious how long it will take Buffy to know that Spike is alive...

And I liked the Buffy/Dana interaction. Hope they'll get closer to each other, because Dana really doesn't deserve to be alone.

[hello_spikey]

Hee. You noticed the Significant Capitals. :D

Buffy will find out, but not just yet. Probably in the next chappie. Wanted to give Dana some time to grow and adjust.

Also, she needs someone to be attached to, someone who isn't a therapist. I think Buffy will fill the role nicely. :)

[hunenka]

It's nice to see that you haven't forgotten that Buffy can be nice too (after all those Fallings and Beings of Use and Bite Whores...). Cause she can!

[hello_spikey]

Aw, I remembers! But someone has to torture the Spike to get my rocks off and she's just always so... convenient!!

I admit, Angel is easier to make into a bastard, being something of a dick at times in canon.
:D

[toobusy2write]

Loved this. *feels so bad for Dana*

The way you wrote how Dana likes Spike was just...wow. It gave me shivers, especially when she affectionately drew his cut off arms. That was really disturbing (in the best possible way, lol).

And now I'm wondering if you're going to have Buffy find out that Spike's alive, or if it's going to be left where it is.

Really liked the Buffy/Dana interaction, too. *pets them both*

[hello_spikey]

You friended me! *does the new friend dance of joy*

*twirls you*

I figure Dana being disturbed, she ought to be disturbing. ;)

In fact, I'm looking forward to more disturbing moments in ensuing chapters. *rubs hands with glee*

Does Buffy find out? Do you want a spoiler or just to wait to find out? :D

[toobusy2write]

*twirls you too*

I actually meant to mention that I'd friended you on one of my feedbacks, but forgot, haha. Didn't want to miss any of your updates, since I hadn't come across this story anywhere else, and somehow missed Compatible Faults until way into it. *g*

As for Buffy finding out, *waffles*...no. Don't want to find out. It's tempting, lol, but I think with this one I want to be surprised where you take it. *g*

[ex_dark_ami]

Oh that was excellent.

They wanted her to draw something happy, so she drew The Vampire. - that made me go aww, until I read this sentence: She ends his arms in nice red circles. - and that was just disturbing.

This was a wonderful start. You write Dana so well. Looking forward to more.

[hello_spikey]

Thank you!

Dana likes Spike... she just does so in a creepy disturbing way. :D

There's so little to Dana in "Damage" - I feel like I'm inventing her whole-cloth so I'm glad she seems familiar!

And that's an appropriately disturbing icon! Poor Spikey!

[wisemack]

Oh, this is Good Stuff! write more, please. ;)

Seriously, I've always wanted to know more about Dana, and your take is just great.

[hello_spikey]

Dana didn't get much development, one episode and gone, so I'm really looking forward to exploring her in this. :)

Thank you for reading!