[FIC] All The Pins and The Pricks 6/??

May 14, 2008 08:33

[i'm feeling:|
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jaeho, apap, fic

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moon1084 May 14 2008, 13:22:34 UTC
ME GOD Fing DAMMIT! (even if i got a heads up and i cheated to get this spot)

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moon1084 May 14 2008, 13:30:16 UTC
dum dum dum: enter trance of "the other man". yunho better watch himself and his cruel ways before jae gets stolen away from you. oh ji you are sooo hot in that sexy bed room pic. gonna get raped i tell ya.

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hell_angel_v2 May 14 2008, 13:45:17 UTC
yay!! *victory dance* lol

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asuka2507 May 14 2008, 13:32:25 UTC
well i guess i read this first before i go to sleep... *midnite*

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hell_angel_v2 May 14 2008, 13:46:01 UTC
its 10 pm here and i couldn't resist postponing this til tomorrow, lol so no worries!

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asuka2507 May 14 2008, 13:49:03 UTC
OMG... why cant yunnie be that decent men n calm down a bit... he shud give joongie tym to explain.... grrrr... i dont wanna hate yunnie but i do now .... a bit >.< n jiho is here... i can imagine him to be gay... lol XD hell yeah i like yunnie getting all jealous... more 3x

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hell_angel_v2 May 14 2008, 13:59:08 UTC
this is only the start of yunho's suffering lol. its ok to hate yunho now, you'll love him when the fic ends :) and yah, jiho just fits the role don't you think? hahaha!

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arakasu May 14 2008, 13:36:41 UTC
Good ^-^ That's a fast update :D

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hell_angel_v2 May 14 2008, 13:46:47 UTC
it is? well i had someone help me along ^-^

and you guys are fast! thanks for reading~ <3

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tine_cheese May 14 2008, 13:59:25 UTC
o_0 I love ittt! You don't have to ask, you've got me hanging on the edge of my seat! XD It's really strong of Jaejoong to step up to Yunho like that! In other yaoi stories, he seems to be the soft one. ^^ Moonbin's cute!!!! >_< So yes, it's really good! ^^

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hell_angel_v2 May 14 2008, 14:02:44 UTC
lol, i just like knowing how many people actually take time to read ;) and yes, i'm trying to make jae a little more independent that usual and not so girly. he's a man after all :) thanks so much for reading~ <3

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kattan69 May 14 2008, 14:01:18 UTC
Horray! You have updated and add in a new guy for Jae. It is about time someone else show an interest in him (besides Yunho). I love to see a jealous Yunho but I also want him to grovel at Jae's feet as well.

Let's see what Jiho can do for Jae...first be a friend who listen and give his shoulder for Jae to cry. Next offer him a job in his company and convince Jae to get away from Yunho. Before declaring his love and support for Jae and his son.

Meanwhile I want Yunho to find out the real reason (5 years ago) by getting Donghae to reveal it accidently and admitted finally to Yunho. And also the report that was burned by his stepmother.

What do you think? If you need more ideas, let me know.

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hell_angel_v2 May 14 2008, 14:05:43 UTC
OMG what i've got to tell you is that you are psychic LOL coz you basically have the whole story line there! jkjk not the whole storyline, but pretty much it ;)

anyways thanks so much for the suggestions, will look into that! *gives you yunjae shaped cookies*

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kattan69 May 14 2008, 14:36:10 UTC
Let me guess some more...in one of the scene Yunho came home drank (because of Jae), the stepmother tried to seduce Yunho but failed and accidently said out about her burning Jae's report. That's when Yunho realised something and checked with Donghae. And finally Donghae revealed all, making Yunho feel very remorse about misunderstanding Jae. With that in mind and clear his thoughts, Yunho decided to actively pursue Jae again...that's when the 'grovel' start to take place..you know what I mean.

So what do you think?

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hell_angel_v2 May 14 2008, 21:33:17 UTC
its almost like that, lol. but not quite. XP but i can't tell you yet coz that way you won't keep on reading anymore. haha!

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