[HP] More Than It Seems (1/3?)

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I started to write it in August. Or September. But the first version felt bad. I re-wrote quite a huge part what I had already written... and here it is. Brought to you thanks to two things. One of them is this song - "Where" by Lisbeth Scott. The other one... my getting nostalgic and remembering my first year as a teacher.

Title: More Than It

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[dayadhvam_triad]

TROLLLLLLLLLLLLL. Oh Snape, you. How he must enjoy writing that. ;P I like the whole biscuit thing. Well, I like Snape's interactions with everyone. :D The only random thing that stood out to me was the use of ellipsis several times in the last sentence--I think it's more effective if you do it fewer times in a sentence. (And just imo, but I prefer dashes. :P)

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I have no idea if he enjoyed it... probably not quite XD I can easily imagine him frowning and muttering something along "these idiots" lines XDD Deep in his in heart he is a teacher and no teacher enjoys such things, believe me. Isn't he the one who grades all the end Potions exams? And still the trio manges to get quite good grades in them. It would mean that at least part of the job he can do properly, without his prejudices and dislikes getting in the way.
Speaking of which... recently I discovered a sudden urge to give this grade to a few students >.>;

That last line is directly copied from the book ^^; Bad of me - I should have mentioned it. So it's not quite my work here ^^; I thought that I would keep that in the fic, to show a canon event from another POV.

Thank you for reading and commenting :D It means a lot.

[dayadhvam_triad]

Oh dear, I'm not sure I want to ask how those specific students tested, then...

My bad, I totally forgot about that! I only read HP7 once after its release and haven't looked at it since. ARRGGHHH JKR. >(

♥!

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Awfully bad. Enough to say.

I haven't read it at all, but I have a book at home, so I checked. JKR making her own characters OOC, huh? ^^;