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The Story of Their Lives: Becoming a Parent

Oct 31, 2009 21:11

Some of you have seen a part of it already.

Title: Becoming a Parent
Characters: Kushina, Minato, and Naruto. MinaKushi (They need more love, damn it >:[)
Genre: General/Romance/Tragedy
Rating: PG/K
Word count: around 1750
Warnings: The last part is very spoilerish for chapters 439 & 440.
Summary: The joy of waiting for the baby to be born, the ( Read more... )

t.their lives, !fanfic, s.naruto, p.minakushi

Comments 28

mirax November 1 2009, 15:50:20 UTC

ASDFK I loved this! It was so cute to be reading it. I know we haven't been given much information on the two in general, but I think you captured their personalities perfectly. Great job! <3

helike November 1 2009, 16:21:15 UTC

I'm glad you liked XD I need to confess that I partially based it on all these stories of soon-to-be-parents that I'd heard in order to make it believable XD
Thanks for reading and commenting :)

000_hester_000 November 1 2009, 16:05:09 UTC

Ah, I think that the last line is what makes this. I've always thought this pairing is cute, but I've never been able to write it myself, so I think it's great that it's such a source of inspiration for you. Does that sound weird? I didn't mean it to sound weird, k? I meant it to sound... normalish, I guess?

helike November 1 2009, 16:26:05 UTC

I love them both to bits, but sadly,even I don't get much inspiration when it comes to these two, as it's obvious that they were so happy and loved each other so much *has some bad love-related experience herself*
Nothing sounds weird ^^

Thank you for reading and commenting ^^ It means a lot ^^

000_hester_000 November 1 2009, 17:30:49 UTC

Aw, I'm sorry about your bad experiences with love. Well, not that I've ever done any better. Although to be honest, I don't really care anyway, which probably makes things easier on me. Either way though, I think it is kinda hard to try to write a pairing when the couple involved seems so happy-- it's so frustrating to try to make sure that you're not being sappy.

helike November 1 2009, 20:06:38 UTC

No worries ^^ I think of it as past experience that I'll hopefully learn from.
Actually that possibility of turning it all sappy is what scares me so much while writing romance that I hardly ever try it =_=

rubystar45 November 2 2009, 00:17:12 UTC

My gosh this is so sweet!
I love reading stories about this pairing but I don't have the inspiration to seriously write a story about them. You did a great job!

helike November 2 2009, 10:28:16 UTC

Thank you XD I'm glad that you liked it ^^

dune_master November 4 2009, 09:55:50 UTC

I must admit I'm not really interested in this pairing, but this story is sweet and touching and somewhat sad considering how all this ends. And I like the way you portrayed Kushina. So little is known about her from the manga, but she feels so real in this story.

"Our first meeting started from a kick. Your kick."
I'm 100 % that's how it happened. XPP

helike November 4 2009, 13:31:23 UTC

In that case I'm more happy than usual after receiving a review :)
I think I used up all stories about soon-to-be parents in order to make it more real. And Kushina.. is just Kushina ^^; The only hint is that she's a lot like Naruto.

Yeah... I bet it hurt... a lot XD

I'm really glad that you liked it ^^