Under Fire

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So here you have it - a little bit of my thoughts on something that I call the biggest hypocrisy of the Jedi. No attachments, you say? Then what about bonds between Masters and their Padawans? >.>; It sure is not an attachment. How could it be? *sarcasm

Comments

[istne_pieklo]

I must confess I didn't even know them before I read your fic, but it's a very touching and very sad read. And beautifully executed, darling. The bond between a Master and a Padawan is a wonderful thing, and I think you showed it perfectly. The ending lines made me sob. T_T <3
I've noticed one small thing, though: he would probably rolled his eyes - either roll, or have rolled? >_

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Neither did I. Better don't ask how much time I spent on reading about the battle and about the survivors, trying to find some Padawan that I could use in the story. Braidon was the only one... and I still had to made up his personality ^^;

I'm glad you liked it ^^ I didn't think this one was likeable, so I'm really glad. I'm gonna explore the subject even more in the nearest future. Thank you for commenting ^^

And sh... You didn't see anything *corrects*

[dune_master]

And here I took pride in remembering even the most insignificant characters of the Saga. Yet I didn't know these two. XPP

Nice story. Great action description and a sad, yet touching ending.

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No worries, it did take some effort to find these two. It seems that in canon they only have faces and names and not that much more is known about them .__.;

Thanks :D I'm glad you liked it XD