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The Story of Their Lives: Of Hatred and Love

Feb 15, 2009 21:35

Have something in a quasi-Valentine mood.

Brought to you thanks to the awesome song: "I Won't Make You" by Something Corporate.

Title: Of Hatred and Love
Characters: Kushina, Minato and some other characters. MinaKushi (They need more love. Believe it!)
Genre: General/Romance
Rating: PG/K+
Word count: 3061+
Warnings: No spoilers if you know who ( Read more... )

t.their lives, !fanfic, s.naruto, p.minakushi

Comments 26

premium_shaday February 15 2009, 21:14:32 UTC

helike February 16 2009, 18:15:59 UTC

Thanks :D

pinguinolatino February 16 2009, 07:31:28 UTC

This was very sweet, I really liked it. I loved how you described the progression of her feelings towards Minato and all the cute little moments between them. <3

And MinaKushi does need more love!

helike February 16 2009, 18:15:36 UTC

I'll never believe it was love at first sight if I am to judge her by Naruto's behaviour XDD

Thank you for commenting, I'm glad that you liked the story :)

istne_pieklo February 16 2009, 17:48:46 UTC

I was honestly planning to read this last night, but evil work stopped me from doing it))) I've just left you a review at fanfiction.net, but last time I did, it ate half of it, so I'll just... say how much I loved this again, here! XDD You definitely make Kushina a really realistic, interesting character. =))

helike February 16 2009, 18:13:55 UTC

No worries, honey :) Just got around replying it XDD I think ff.net didn't eat anything this time XDD

And I'm glad that you think that I made her realistic XDD Actually I only imagined a female version of Naruto XD

shaitanah February 16 2009, 19:04:10 UTC

Yay! Good thing, then. I don't trust ebil ff-net sometimes)))
I bet that's pretty much how she was)))))

helike February 16 2009, 19:23:23 UTC

I don't really trust them, too :P
Well... That's what Tsunade said, didn't she? That Naruto is a lot like Kushina in terms of personality and techniques he uses. But he looks like Minato's copy XD

dune_master February 17 2009, 15:58:19 UTC

A very touching story. I especially loved the bit about her dressing up; somehow it says quite a lot. And the ending is cute. Too bad they didn't have more time. And we still don't know what exactly happened to Kushina after Naruto was born, right?

helike February 17 2009, 20:21:49 UTC

Well... They did say that she was a tomboy, so I bet that she didn't wear dresses often XD And I'm glad that you liked the ending, because that part was the most difficult to write. So easy it would be to turn it into some soap opera >.>;; And yes... we still don't know what happened to her :/

Thanks :D

naureen_rally February 26 2009, 07:03:45 UTC

wow. that's strong. it's written very simply but it means a lot more.
<3 it.

helike February 26 2009, 08:42:55 UTC

There is no need to write such a story in an overly complicated way :)
Thank you :)

naureen_rally February 26 2009, 21:46:10 UTC

well its lucky you have the ability to express yourself in such little words.. i'd ramble forever to try and get the point across.

helike February 27 2009, 19:47:49 UTC

LOL Actually usually I do not have such an ability XDD My one-shots happen to grow endlessly XDD; But apparently writing a story consisting of a few short parts might do the trick.