Comments | helen_halliwell: this fine line

helen_halliwell

this fine line

Jan 24, 2010 19:48

Her body’s trembling and she’s not certain if he’s aware of what he’s doing to her as the force of his kiss causes her to fall backwards, back pushed flat against the bed, her arms circling his neck. His body’s on top of her in an instant, as if they’d never parted to begin with, the familiarity of his weight overwhelming and overpowering her. mark ( Read more... )

show: grey's anatomy, character: little grey, character: the nazi, pairing: lexie/mark, character: dr. mcsteamy

Comments 8

drzlilsuga January 25 2010, 02:11:05 UTC

Bravo!

You captured the angst and sadness of Lexie perfectly. I'm so upset with what Shonda is doing to both of them on the show and I hope that they can reconcile a bit like in this fic.

Great job! :D

helen_halliwell January 25 2010, 02:22:07 UTC

Thanks! I hope so too. It will probably take a while, but so long as we get Mark/Lexie interactions, I'll be happy.

Glad you enjoyed it. I think Lexie's sadness is so profound, mostly because Mark really was her best friend. She doesn't seem to have anyone else. (Meredith sure, but they're not exactly close). Ugh...what happened to Mark/Lexie is just so tragic!

drzlilsuga January 25 2010, 04:21:55 UTC

Exactly.

I just need there to be Mark/Lexie interaction. I really don't want them to sweep this under the rug. Even if other people don't like the pairing, it was an important relationship to both characters.

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helen_halliwell January 25 2010, 23:28:38 UTC

Thank you! Means a lot coming from such a great writer as yourself!
Yes, I just need Mark/Lexie interactions....I don't want them to forget about Mark/Lexie and just move on. The thought's too depressing to even consider.
So, I'll live here in denial and we can continue to write Lexie/Mark fic in order to salvage this amazing relationship!
And thanks! I have a little too much fun making tags....

lattelady6 January 25 2010, 03:40:19 UTC

Oh thank you for writing that. It gives me hope!

helen_halliwell January 25 2010, 23:29:45 UTC

You're very welcome! I'm trying to remain optimistic. I have to believe they'll end up back together, you know, like Mer/Der? It took them how many seasons to get it right? Maybe Lexie and Mark are the new Mer and Der....I'm gonna go with that.

Thanks again!

lovelylytton February 22 2010, 10:58:09 UTC

I wouldn't have expected such an hopeful ending, but it's perfect. Poor Lexie - she's such a lovely wreck in this fic. So torn, so nervous, so Lexie. Well done!

helen_halliwell February 25 2010, 02:23:15 UTC

I know, I adore Lexie's character. Thanks for reading :)