we hold these truths

[helen_halliwell]

She’s feeling like she used to back in med school before an exam she knew she wasn’t fully prepared for. She doesn’t like to be caught off guard. She’s always prepared, always ready. She hates when plans change. She’s no good at improvising. flash forward -- olivia-centric. spoilers for all of season one. olivia/mark, olivia/lloyd

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Comments

[misscam]

Really enjoyed this one. Your characterisation of Olivia really worked for me, and you balanced the struggle in her very well. All the characters felt very organic. Found myself even feeling a bit sorry for Mark, and I'm not a fan of how he's been ating!

Nice work :)

[helen_halliwell]

Thanks! Glad to hear you enjoyed it! I can't wait for the show to come back so that we can learn more about the characters. I do love Olivia though. I'm not sure why, but she's become the character who most intrigues me.

[quirkysmuse]

Oh, wow! FANTASTIC. You have Olivia's characterization down perfectly, as well as Mark. It's like a missing scene from the show.

Great work.

[helen_halliwell]

Thank you! :)