Comments | helen_c: OC Fic : The Sad, Sad Tale of Two White Knights (3/3)

helen_c

OC Fic : The Sad, Sad Tale of Two White Knights (3/3)

Dec 01, 2006 17:07

Title : The Sad, Sad Tale of Two White Knights

Author : Helen C.

Rating : PG

Summary : Title says it all…

Disclaimer : The characters and the universe were created and are owned by Josh Schwartz. No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended.

AN. Written for brandywine421's hiatus challenge. My prompts were : bullet, haze, ( Read more... )

fic : the oc, fic: challenges, fic : white knights, fic : oc chaptered

Comments 28

fredsmith518 December 1 2006, 16:33:10 UTC

The boys took bullets for the girls, the girls went to bat for the boys.
very well rounded ending, nicely done

helen_c December 2 2006, 10:22:41 UTC

Thanks, fred! :)

beachtree December 1 2006, 18:05:37 UTC

No, I didn't peak and read this because I STILL owe you for the previous chapter. I am still backing up. Beep, beep, beep...

helen_c December 2 2006, 10:24:39 UTC

Hee, look, I know I'm posting a lot these days, so don't feel like you *have* to reply to every chapter. I don't want to make you feel guilty or anything, and I know that this time of the year is always bury ('tis the season after all).

beachtree December 2 2006, 16:57:54 UTC

You know I'm always channeling my inner Ryan. No one needs to make me feel guilty- I've got that covered. Today is a big designated ketchup day now that it's officially almost noon and I'm home and done with work.

You're at the top of the list, so keep posting! (I do have to finish a beta chappie first.)

In a bleak S3, I did love that hair pulling moment. He was too cute, even if I did momentarily shudder and hope no one had done that to him in the past- and NOT in fun!

helen_c December 3 2006, 11:40:27 UTC

I loved that hair pulling thing as well (Ryan's face was so... well.)
Just as I loved that scene in season 2 where he shoved Seth's face in his locker and kept walking. Heeee.

Hope you're having a good weekend!

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shakespearebint December 1 2006, 19:05:03 UTC

nicely ended - I really enjoyed this fic

helen_c December 2 2006, 10:26:05 UTC

Thank you--glad you liked it.

millstone1005 December 1 2006, 20:24:05 UTC

that was a cute little story

helen_c December 2 2006, 10:26:57 UTC

Hee, thanks--I was going for cute, so glad to know it worked.

chaseii December 1 2006, 21:30:59 UTC

Nicely done! Poor Seth -- I can understand his mortification, and dread of going back to school. Ryan telling of his own embarrassing experience? So in character -- even though he leaves a few things out, he tells enough to let Seth know he understands.

Love that the core four (plus one) rally to protect one of their own -- I'd steer clear of Ryan, Summer, and/or Taylor (and Marissa if she had any lawn furniture nearby.) Nice wrap-up for your sad, sad, tale of two white knights!

helen_c December 2 2006, 10:30:32 UTC

lol, yes, I just don't see Ryan sharing some details, not even with Seth...

I always liked the scene where Marissa slaps Luke (and Ryan seemed faintly amused, then).

Thanks, chase! :)