BSG Fic : Crash (8/9)

[helen_c]

Title : Crash

Author : Helen C.

Rating : R

Summary : Galactica, Apollo, I've been hit. Repeat, I've been hit. (Set in S2, somewhere between Final Cut and Flight of the Phoenix).

Disclaimer : The characters and the universe were created and are owned by Ronald D. Moore and Universal Television Studios to name but a few. No money is being made. No

Comments

[suffolkgirl]

First, love the Apollo/Starbuck banter, especially the callbacks to after her crash.

Second, I was laughing out loud at the dig about the magically never-ending supply of stogies and ambrosia. Good one!

Third, I was reading the dream at the beginning and thinking that a psychologist would have a field day with this Leoben/Kara thing, and then read:

apparently, in some dark recess of his brain, Kara was a Cylon (a little heavy on the symbolism, don't you think?)

on which I laughed out loud again. It does seem to fit with their relationship, though!

Oh, and I liked the little bit where Bill tells Lee not to hurry back and winces at the lie - lovely moment.

[helen_c]

For the little story, in the first draft of the story, Bill was actually the Cylon, and it worked even better, but the story itself wasn't making a lot of sense, so I had to change that part.

Lee does have bizarre relationships with people...