I knew Danny wasn't as OK with all this as he seemed and the fact that it took Kono and Chin to point it out to Steve was very telling. I'm glad they were able to work things out in the end. Great story, thank you so much!
Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment. Yea, part one was way too smooth. Tbh honest, I was scared readers would stop there, say 'unrealistic' and abandon the story before getting to the part where it gets kind of explained ;-).
Am sure happy that Kono and Chin talked to Steve about Danny...as I just knew that Danny wasn't himself...am glad that it worked out in the end, and I really liked the idea of the silver bracelet where he would take it off if he wanted 'vanilla' time or him time! :-D
I loved this. It captures so many of the problems couples face when one partner is scene and the other isn't, and how sometimes partners that love each other the most are the ones that end up hurting each other the most, because they don't understand.
You handled all this beautifully, and I loved every word!
Thank you for the nice comment. When I started writing this story, my goal was to bring across the problems such a relationship might entail, because personally I find that many of the stories out there make it too easy lol. I'm really happy that you think I managed to do that :)
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Very good!
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You handled all this beautifully, and I loved every word!
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