[U-Kiss] Eight Flew Over, One was Destroyed

[heijihatsutori]

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He walks on with a grave expression on his face, which is made painfully obvious by the way people seems to avoid him when they bump into him at the hallway; even the common greeting is more polite than usual, which he dismissed carelessly.

Comments

[nicolochy]

Awww... This just looks sad with Kiseop's (sort of) unfinished business being his meeting with Kibum. Or maybe he's just hiding.

It's... ow it's a beautiful idea and takes me back to the first (and only) time I went to my high school's rooftop and saw the sky up close. The way you told it was good. But now I'm sad.

[heijihatsutori]

OMG IT'S YOU.

Sorry but I've been reading your fics and then you are commenting on mine and my mind cannot compute it. Long story short I'm a fan, so yeah. Now if you can excuse myself while I calm the heck down-

Okay. First, thank you for reading and commenting! \O/ I leave that to your imagination, though sad is what I'm going for, so glad to know I succeeded. :)

Thanks for your kind words! You are far too kind~ Though sorry for making you feel sad! ;__; I'm not capable of writing happy stuff so...have some cookies? >.<

/gives you chocolate cookies

Thanks again for reading! Do continue to look after me; I still need improvement, I think.

[axelburn9]

Wow.. that was really good. But I'm kind of confused too. If I'm interpreting it right... Is Kiseop a ghost? Like he jumped off the rooftop or something and it's just his ghost that Kibum and Dongho can see?

Well, anyway, it was very well written. I like the way the first and last parts parallel each other, it's a really good way to end it. I really liked this fic :)

[heijihatsutori]

OMG thanks! And sorry for the confusion! DD: Yup, Kiseop's a ghost, I really should stop killing my biases and the railing fell off when he went up the rooftop that day, so it's an accident.

Damn, you're far too kind~ Thanks for the kind words! O///O I want to go with the parallel style from the beginning, so glad it comes off good!

Thanks for reading and commenting! /gives off cookies \O/

[ext_1150617]

when i read this, my mind totally flashing back to your old fiction in 2007. remember 'second chance of time'? that is your first fiction that i've been reading. and starting on that day, i am your fan.:)

the story is great. just absolubely showing your character by your words. can't elobarate how weird your words can make me smile. keep it up!

[heijihatsutori]

Thanks! O///O I'm not even that good...but I'll try harder to meet your expectations! Thanks for the support! \O/

Glad that you like this! Thanks for reading and commenting! *showers you with cookies ;A;*

[kirara_ai]

I'm really sorry for this late reply :(
School got me busy. National exam and preparation for college. Busy month orz

Thanks for your lovely bday present. I'm sorry I never give you any presents for your birthday :(

It's hard for me to understand the story because I know almost nothing about U-KISS. But, this is a good story, that's why I can enjoy reading it until the end.

I really love your way on describing what's on their minds. Not only this fic, but also on the previous fics you wrote. Keep up the good work neechan! Ganbatte!!! >

[heijihatsutori]

It's okay~ I'm sorry for the late reply myself >.<
Ouch, that sounds busy. But then I was busy with graduation project and all so yeah. How's the exam? :) Hope you did okay (and if you're just going to take it, good luck! \O/)

You're welcome~! Nah, it's fine, no need to worry about it! ;)

Ouch. Should've asked if you familiar with them or not, but then I tend to write with ambiguous atmosphere (what) that it's easy to switch them into another fandom altogether I think orz. Still, I'm glad you can enjoy it! :D

Thanks! I'm always putting extra care on that to make sure it doesn't come off as confusing, so glad that you love it. :D Thanks for the support! I'll try to do better in my next work~ <3

[kirara_ai]

Ganbatte for your graduation project! :D
I graduated as the best students in Social Study class, with 2 of my friends :)
and I got 100 for math so i should say that my exams going so well XDD
but I still have one more exam. entrance exam for college. thanks for your wish, hope you do well too :D

Yes yes I really love your way on describing the situation and what's on their minds XDD

I should try to make a fic too, then I can give it to you as present :DD
I'll start working on it soon after I finish my college things XDD

Ganbatte neechan!! XDD

[heijihatsutori]

Well, I'm already done with the graduation project actually but thanks! :D
Whoaa~! Congrats! That's awesome! \O/ Hope you pass the entrance exam then! Welcome~ and thanks! :D

Thanks! You're far too kind~

Wow! Go on! That'll be an honor for me, thanks. :DD
No need for rush, just the thought of it is already aplenty. XDD

Thanks! You too! XDD