HOLY SHIT! So this was fucking amazing, best thing EVER. (Besides the fact that I didn't use my time to do my homework) Okay you took porn and made it into Plot, HOLY SHIT.
...that was just the Best Thing Ever. Talk about taking a prompt and running a marathon with it, wow. Several marathons, even. I know we've been talking each other through this monster since it started, and I really can't say just how enjoyable that was. I maybe be able to write a truckload of detail and maybe even a hint of plot, but YOU, Girlfriend, =you= write a serious story. And That? Is really, Really awesome.
There was a whole middle section I was -not- familiar with, so that was a nice surprise, as was the "all new" introduction. And the end? Yowza. I was sort of expecting somehow 'more' from WomanHandled 2, but then its being Max's farewell piece and feeling somewhat understated made the contrast of Assring Brothers Circus make SUCH an impact. That one really was horrifying, and we didn't even get to see it!
And the entire ending from Jensen's POV worked so, so beautifully. There were a couple of times where things seemed to be working out so well between them, I wondered where the conflict could possibly
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*drops to knees*
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Amazing. Fucking amazing
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...that was just the Best Thing Ever. Talk about taking a prompt and running a marathon with it, wow. Several marathons, even. I know we've been talking each other through this monster since it started, and I really can't say just how enjoyable that was. I maybe be able to write a truckload of detail and maybe even a hint of plot, but YOU, Girlfriend, =you= write a serious story. And That? Is really, Really awesome.
There was a whole middle section I was -not- familiar with, so that was a nice surprise, as was the "all new" introduction. And the end? Yowza. I was sort of expecting somehow 'more' from WomanHandled 2, but then its being Max's farewell piece and feeling somewhat understated made the contrast of Assring Brothers Circus make SUCH an impact. That one really was horrifying, and we didn't even get to see it!
And the entire ending from Jensen's POV worked so, so beautifully. There were a couple of times where things seemed to be working out so well between them, I wondered where the conflict could possibly ( ... )
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