Fic: The Five-O Diner

Dec 17, 2012 17:39

Title - The Five 0 Diner
Recipient - kaige68
Author - heffermonkey
Rating - G
Word count - 4476
Summary - AU!TeamTeen in which our team work in a diner, the Five 0 Diner. Chin tries to keep everything in order, whilst his waitresses flirt with the jocks and his delivery guys flirt with each other. Meanwhile the chef is using customers as involuntary test subjects ( Read more... )

fic: h50, rating: g, fandom: h50, character: danny williams, character: chin ho kelly, character: steve mcgarrett, character: kono kalakaua

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kaige68 December 18 2012, 11:17:48 UTC
I love this! Love love love! Love It!

It's a great day when it starts with a squee at 530!

It's wonderful how you transferred the character so well to this setting! You captured each of them so well.

Thank you!!!! It's everything. I ran around with my thoughts like a chicken in a glitter factory, and now there's this amazingness!!!! *SQUEE*. Thank you so so much!

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heffermonkey December 19 2012, 07:09:35 UTC
:D yey so pleased you enjoyed it x Merry Christmas xx

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kaige68 December 20 2012, 17:21:44 UTC
Merry Christmas to you too!!!

I'm still squeeing about this. I can't thank you enough!

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kitmerlot1213 December 18 2012, 14:18:17 UTC
This was adorable!

And I loved how perfectly in character everyone was--they may be running a diner, but they're still the Five-0 crew we know and love :)

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heffermonkey December 19 2012, 07:10:34 UTC
Thanks very much :D I'm glad it worked as an AU

xx

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alba17 December 18 2012, 14:31:28 UTC
Great fun! I love how you transferred the characters to this setting.

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heffermonkey December 19 2012, 07:11:11 UTC
Thank you, I enjoyed this writing one and I'm glad it worked as an AU setting.

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sexycazzy December 18 2012, 18:44:53 UTC
Really really liking this AU very much! Every character were so in-character! :)

Thank you for sharing!

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heffermonkey December 19 2012, 07:11:41 UTC
thanks so much xx

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