I had a suspicion that it might have been Rick's former lover so wasn't really surprised but I didn't certainly expect you to bring the parents in! That was a very interesting insight into the not-so-easy relationship between parents and Kau'i and Rick too.
The last scene between Rick and Kau'i made me nearly cry! It was so very emotional and I loved Kau'i's words to Rick telling him that he will continue to call him Sir/Master until it burns into Rick's head that it wasn't his fault!
Yeah I didn't want to drag out the 'whodunnit' very long as it could have been glaringly obvious.
Rick and Kau'i have obviously been thrown off course by this attack but I want to instil that the core of their relationship is strong, even in this difficult time.
lovely to see the real relationship underneath "the scenes" they do....and Rick falling from his position of caregiver to being given care by his sub....
Yup - I like that these two are so much more than just a Dom/sub, although that side of them is probably more prominent than say Danny/Steve. And yes, Rick is feeling equally as vulnerable as Kau'i right now, second guessing his life, his actions and how he behaves. Kau'i needs Rick and Rick needs Kau'i so together they'll pick up the pieces.
Yes, despite what has happend, Kau'i holds no grudges against Rick. The parents are of course, blinded by their differences of opinion and strong opinion at that.
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The last scene between Rick and Kau'i made me nearly cry! It was so very emotional and I loved Kau'i's words to Rick telling him that he will continue to call him Sir/Master until it burns into Rick's head that it wasn't his fault!
A very good chapter! Update soon :D
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Rick and Kau'i have obviously been thrown off course by this attack but I want to instil that the core of their relationship is strong, even in this difficult time.
more soon xx
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Hell is going to come down on David when he's found
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nice chapter...:)
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