The First Kiss
Title: The First Kiss
Genre: friendship, fluff, crack
Pairing: OnKey, JongKey (the Kim Brothers), JongHo
Length: Serial of Chibi OnKey ( I’m a Big Boy, The Best Gift)
Rating: G
Disclaimer: unbeta. I owned nothing and English is my second language. I got bored from writing so much angst lately…. T___T
Summany: Kibum was sick and let’s see what Jinki ( Read more... )
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srsly eonni! i like crack more than angsty ones. ^^~ AIGOO~! SO CUUUUTE~ I WANA SQUISHY THEM ^3^
omo omo omo~ is this JongHo i seeeee? 8D AHAHAHAHA I LOVE JONGHO! i love jongtae too, then jongho in 2nd
aigoooooo~ JINKI IS SO CUTE ^3^ and so is KEY bb ^^ omo i wish i could cuddle with them ajdbsjjdbhj
i don't know why i am being incoherent eonni. oh i do. because I LOVE THIS FLUFFY CRACK CUTE FIC SO MUCH!!!
and the kiss was. WOAH. O_o Jinki, where did you learn to do that? O_o YOU'RE FREAKIN' 14 FOR GOD'S SAKE! (hihihi. but i already had a boyfriend at 14 NYAHAHAHA 8D, but not anymore, fuuu~) BUT THAT WAS SO CUTE! way to make kibum take his medicine jinki! *cheers*
awww the dino nest and the pancakes were soooooooooooooo~ CUTE AND YUMYUM~ me wants *A*
huwaaaaaaah~ I WANT MOOOOOORE OF THIS EONNI! MOOOOOOORE!!! *rofl demanding*
I LOVE YOU EONNI~~~!
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yeah... i got hyper when writing this fic. it only took me 3 hours to wrote and editing compare to wrote an angst that need about at least 16 hours T____T
so CRACK RULES!!!!
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lol, it usually takes me daaaaaaaaaaays to finish fluff and happy stories eonni. T^T WAE?! and it only takes me hours (or less) to finish angst. T^T am i really that angsty towards the world? O_O lol
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I hope this will be lessen your stress from studying XDDD
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since you love chibi!onkey XDDD
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i really like this- no i LOVE THIS~!! so much.. as much as Yoogeun love Kibum xDD
anyway.. comment start xDD
loving how that.. what this call?? so small-that-almost-disappear- because-of-the-smile yeah, that kind of things.. so cutee >w<
bronto-min & raptor-jjong xDDD love love love~~ but where our baby tae's goo~~??
you know, smart people, sometimes they just… you know…lame jokes, slow reaction…. Hahhhh… this.. im not sure that im one of smart people, but my sister always tell me this.. and sometimes it made me sad.. ;______;
"Arcana Heart 3" what game is that? i search and its like.. idk, cute anime~??
Did you curious about the phone call? Maybe in the next story I let you know, but maybe…just maybe…no pressure taken baby. i demand for next story oennie~~ pweasee~?? *puppy eyes* xDD
Oh, if you wonder who the best student was in Jinki’s school, it’s Kibum. What? Kibum? Why not? I want Kibum to be smarter than Jinki. Accept that. god, i laugh so much at this.. xDD i like how you ( ... )
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hope you like this :)
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neeewww chappp >.<
khekekkekeke~~
wuaahhhhhh this chap is cute!!!
i really love this and the way you write this is sooo entertaining <3
“He is a boy. But even everybody said that Minho, the BOYfriend, is looked like an alien, to me he’s more like a brontosaurus. You know, long neck, small head. So he is a total match to a raptor Jjong.” Now, that the kind of information you will accept from a dino geek named Jinki.
bahahhahahahhahaaa!!!
its sooo damn funny!!!!
and that duo dino havent confes at eachother yet tskk... khekkeekkee~
omoooo they first kiss!!
and now jinki get sick too hahahhahaa:D
p.s : i want to know the mothers talk khkekekeke~
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thank you dear & love you :)
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