Clandestine

Jan 06, 2011 15:13

2min, angst, romance, NC-17, oneshot, ~3,600
Quiet promises stand the strongest.

Oh my god, what even is this. ;_;
First smut (well not really smut anyway) dedicated to chaeii because we are both perverts at heart. ♥

Taemin isn't quite sure of where he was. )

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chaeii January 6 2011, 16:13:02 UTC
first comment!!!!!!! /childish but w/e I am cool like that.

A familiar smile, all white and sharp canines, broke through the fierce features he’s come to memorise, first with his mind, then with his fingers, and it finally hit him that his thumbs weren’t going to run over tanned cheeks tomorrow.
WORINTGORWNGOEG ;_______________________; YOU SAID IT WAS SMUT WHY ARE YOU MAKING ME SADFACE.

Love was soft and secretive for them, conversed with long fingers going between his smaller ones
siggghhhh I love how something like that is able to describe their love so well. Amazing bb ;A;

The cold surface of the refrigerator only goes underneath his palms now, when he digs for a snack or a cup of milk. It doesn’t chill the small of Taemin’s back in the dead of the night, doesn’t send shivers through his spine from the coolness, because Minho isn’t here to push him up against it.
OIC TEASE MUCH? :b

English songs don’t blast in it and JongHyun doesn’t sing at the top of his voice because there wasn’t anyone to annoy.
;_________; jongkey

... )

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heehe January 6 2011, 16:20:25 UTC
OMG WAYLT ;____________: SJGHKJWRHKJHWRKJGRG.

YOU ARE COOL AND YOU KNOW IT. eHehHEhehEHehHe kitchen sex who does not want. ^_________^

I DON'T KNOW WHY I AM MAKING YOU SADFACE. I JUST HAD TO OR I DON'T KNOW. THE FIC WILL BE 400 WORDS. ~_~ OF...SMUT.

EEEEEK, I'M GLAD YOU LIKE THE SMUT OKAY I HAVE NEVER WRITTEN SEX BEFORE I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT I WAS DOING THROUGHOUT THE ENTIRE PARAGRAPHS OKAY. ;___; /HIDES FOREVER IN SHAME

♥ I LOVE YOU SO MUCH OKAY BB, I AM GOING TO FLAIL ON THE TRAIN TOMORROW YOU BETTER BE PREPARED. OMG. I AM SO GLAD YOU ARE MY FIC!MOM. IDK. <3

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chaeii January 6 2011, 23:21:59 UTC
Yeah who does not want so you know what to do ^______________^

you have never wrote sex before. YOU SURE.
I RECALL SEC 2. WITH A BIRTHDAY PRESENT ETC. AND A CHOCOBO. YOU LIE. YOU L I E.

EEEEE I AM EXCITED! LMAO WHAT FIC!MOM WAYLT ;A; THERE ARE BETTER CANDIDATES OUT THERE OMG.

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heehe January 7 2011, 01:20:23 UTC
KITCHEN SEX? ~________~
BUT I DON'T KNOW HOW TO WRITE LIKE. BAM SLAM PORN.

O
M
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NEVER REMIND ME OF THAT. EVER.
IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT. YOU WANTED FINAL FANTASY PORN.
OH MY GOD. ;________; anditwastragic.

YOU'RE THE BEST MOM. ♥

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beastlyshine January 6 2011, 18:38:52 UTC
Wahhhhh i like this one so much!!! And then I looked at the author and it's you :) haha oh my gosh, that poor little maknae. two years is such a long time. good thing he survived it~ hahaha otherwise there would have been no amazing dramatic reunion scene aahhhh you make me lose my words. Good job. :D

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heehe January 7 2011, 01:11:49 UTC
Hello hello! I remember you. :D ♥

I'm glad that you liked this! It's kinda pwp though. ;_;
Haha, of course taemin was gonna survive. The maknae is strong. /nods

Aaaaaah, your comment flatters me too much. ;___; Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

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8D doneitall January 6 2011, 20:16:19 UTC
This was really sweet, and romantic. This was really sad too. I really don't have anything to say, but this was just too good for my words, you know?

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Re: 8D heehe January 7 2011, 01:13:10 UTC
I'm happy that it was romantic. ^^ Sorry about the sad parts. /passes you happy meal

Ah, you're too kind, thank you very much for reading and commenting! ♥

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teddorky January 6 2011, 21:10:16 UTC
This is really very good!!!! Possibly one of my favourite oneshots!! Your english and writing style and everything else is PERFECT...

"Because although they are quiet and barely noticeable, but they never really leave each other."

Oh i love this... It totally describes 2Min in real life.. Jongho and Ontae might be prominent right now but 2Min secretly loves each other!!

I love the smut too... It's not just porn but beautiful porn :))) Love everything!! :))

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heehe January 7 2011, 01:15:19 UTC
Oh gosh, thank you. ;__; I still need to improve though. ^^

Hehe yeah, 2min loves each other quietly. :)))) /omg now I can't stop smiling

Ah, glad that you liked it! Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

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justangel January 7 2011, 00:29:08 UTC
This is a ridiculously good fic, and I'm a sucker for finding myself stifling small sobs as soon as I finish reading it.
I can't help but thinking that Taemin is too mature for his own good, bottling up everything and simply endures. I really can't imagine him how much pain he had been through.

Thank you so much for this.

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heehe January 7 2011, 01:18:13 UTC
Goodness, you're too kind and please stop crying. ;_; /passes tissues

Oh, our maknae does that when Minho hyungwhores. ;__; /stabs Minho

Thank you more for reading and commenting. ♥

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justangel January 7 2011, 02:00:45 UTC
*wipes tears*
I'm new to this fandom as well as ship (You'd probably haven't noticed me around as well *shy*)
), that I'm yet to find out about many of SHINee's quirks, including Minho's 'hyungwhoreness'. But one thing I know, the way you narrated the story created an immense depth towards Taeminnie's character, that as a reader I couldn't help but empathize.

Anyway, do you mind if I browse your journal and dig some more treasure to read?

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heehe January 7 2011, 03:43:09 UTC
Oh! WELCOME WELCOME!!!!! /shakes your hand

I see, well, our SHINee bbs are very unique, so you will learn about them in no time. ^^ Ah, thank you very much for your compliment. ;_;

Oh not at all, please go ahead. ♥ (:

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