Last time I wrote worth a damn

[hedgehog39]

was here

Someone leave a comment this time, yeh? Please. If only to tell me how much I suck and no one got it

Comments

[jr_psykira]

"ruptured like ripened tomatoes"

I like this image :-)

[tiptoe39]

I don't feel competent to review as to me all the Battlelords stuff feels like generic sci-fi stuff and the terminology feels heavy. I'm sure if I already knew the characters/tech it'd seem less cumbersome to me.

[jokermage]

Draw a pirate girl damn it!

[crow112101]

I think it rocks personally, which means I am going to have to try twice as hard with our Eberron logs to top it! Which will then force your next piece to be twice as good as mine. Nothing like writers pushing each others with fun projects.

Speaking of which, I hope you don't mind the little bit of dramatic liberty I am taking with your opening scene in this.