Bulletproof (I Wish I Was)...Chapter 6

May 25, 2009 11:21

Disclaimer: The characters of this fiction, except the bitchtastic Cornelia Albright, belong to ABC/Shondaland. No profit intended ( Read more... )

callica, grey's anatomy, fanfic, angst

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hot_4_hahn May 25 2009, 18:10:28 UTC
*sniffle* Ooh, I love your angst. I can't believe it's almost over. But, I guess mental health first. I could see how this emotionally gripping story may be taking you some dark places. It know it's steering me in that direction. But, then I have a little angsty monkey on my back, jonesing for a constant fix ( ... )

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hectic1 May 25 2009, 19:06:01 UTC
Best. Feedback. Ever. Thank you ( ... )

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sapphicwarrior May 25 2009, 18:24:35 UTC
they broke up??? OMG...
You have to update soon...
They have to make up again in the last part.

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hectic1 May 25 2009, 19:10:40 UTC
Sorry! I was not expecting them to break up either, but they're not a for real broken up. Callie's too stubborn to let it go that easy.

Thanks for sticking around. We'll get that happy ending, one way or another, I promise.

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fast_chicken May 25 2009, 21:10:10 UTC
Another great update! Unfortunately the next one is tne last one. Can't wait to read about the promised happy-end...one way or another :)

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hectic1 May 25 2009, 22:51:04 UTC
Thanks. I know. I'm thinking happy thoughts to try to get there. Happy...happy...happy...

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seabookmonger May 25 2009, 23:30:07 UTC
Aaargh. But I thought it was perfect. sigh. It really could end there but I'm glad that it isn't going to.

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hectic1 May 26 2009, 03:09:27 UTC
You can pretend that's the end if you want. ;)) I thought it would have made a mellow, open-ended, realistic ending, but then I realized there wasn't any real pay off for the readers who've sifted through the miles of angst. And, basically, when it comes down to it, I'm a sucker for a happy ending. Thanks for reading!

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reddirtgirl May 26 2009, 09:44:29 UTC
Ok...again you have me going 'Wow!'. How the hell do you do that? You write so well i feel like I'm a fly on the wall throughout ( ... )

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hectic1 May 26 2009, 12:27:04 UTC
Albright is another shady little character that I kind of like. She's very much the politician. My favorite line was the one about not having the luxury of personal integrity. The fact that she thinks its a luxury says it all to me. And yeah, breaking it down there in front of the chief was pretty cold-blooded, but he was no longer an asset to her and Erica was. Very bitchtastic, hehe.

Well, you can only let someone step on your feelings so many times without it affecting you. Even though Erica wasn't doing it with any kind of malicious intent, she was being pretty harsh to Callie. And poor brilliant but emotionally stunted Erica finally read the writing on the wall. Too bad she took so long.

Thanks for sticking around. I'm pleased that you liked it. And there's only one more to this part of the story. I have some other stuff floating around in my head though. Again, thanks!

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dianeb_047 May 26 2009, 19:50:34 UTC
It truly is sad they couldn't have put some aspect of this into the show, because it certainly would have made better sense, but it's all history now. I'm happy you've provided the proper look.

Again, it all feels real. Albright, boy, she's a worse ball-buster than Erica, but at least she's up-front about it. The business of a hospital is just about as brutal as the surgeries, and I applaud Albright for not pulling any punches but *still* managing to keep the outcome from becoming a death sentence for Seattle Grace.

After all this, I can't imagine Callie and Erica taking a "four month break," though it sounds good on paper and would certainly be the right thing. I just can't fathom it.

Okay, now this is going to sound odd, but I liked this line: "Erica found Callie at the nursery, watching the newborns sleep and fuss." I mean, I liked it because that's totally what newborns in a hospital nursery DO, plus it was just perfect for Callie to be there.

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hectic1 May 26 2009, 22:18:21 UTC
The show...*sigh*. I don't even know what to say to that. That old training of my parents 'if you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all' comes to mind ( ... )

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