Smoking - Chapter 28

[heavenlyxflames]

Title:: Smoking
Genre:: Drama
Fandom:: RPS Vam, Villinde, Dugera, Lindunn, others.
Rating:: R
Summary:: A story, reaching back to the beginning like a twisted, curling whisp of smoke from a slow burning fire.
Disclaimer::Most characters are property only of themselves; I own the storyline and the writing. This is a work of ficiton; treat it as such

Comments

[snowisgreat]

I feel like I should write a long comment but I'm at work and everyone keeps looking over my shoulder to see what I'm reading (the purple picture is appently quite eye-catching :D) so I'm making it short:

Your writing is beautiful, you choice of words makes it stand out (like saying "like so much sand" in stead of just "like sand"), the change between deep thought and everyday situations (making coffee) makes me focus even more, and the feelings you convey blow me away and I cannot get enough of this!! XD

Snowboarding, huh? And I'm looking out my window and seeing a layer of snow that barely covers the ground all the while it's cold as fuck... And I'm not jealous, oh no, not me.

Guess it got semi-long after all :D

[heavenlyxflames]

heheh i often find myself just staring at vivi... like... gahhh hi pretty boy. lmao.

and thank you for all those lovely compliments. I'm glad that it's so effective, and that it can draw you in like that. <3

haha yes, snowboarding in the Swiss Alps. There isn't really much snow here either, but the place we're going is mostly glacier so there's always snow there... but like. yeah. it's so warm where i live that i was out all day in a tanktop, some of my friends were wearing shorts. its sort of weird.

[lianneaw]

I really can't express just how much I adore this story - It's my new obsession, I just can't get enough of it. This is seriously the best fan fic story I have every read. I've never been so moved by one characters struggle with their own emotions, or so disgusted at another characters dispicable, heartless behaviour before. Don't get me wrong, I've read some really good fan fic, but this is on another level, and I just can't explain why!!

I cannot wait to read more, it's like a drug, I need more...

xx

[heavenlyxflames]

thank you dear. im really glad to know you like it and are enjoying it so much. <3

more soon.

[blueandbrady]

If I could make some comprehensible sound to tell you how much I hate Ville right now I would.

You have no idea. Well, you might, but still.

Punishment = Ville gets his dick chopped off. I think that's best.

[heavenlyxflames]

but but but no he needs that!

hahah.

*huggles*

[mildly_neurotic]

Wow. That chapter was so just WOW. Everything I said about Ville's faults making him more human in past comments I take back. He's a ratsass bastard of colossal proportions.

To spend years waiting for Linde to allow him that privilidge and then not realise how important it really was to him makes Ville either the dumbest fucker ever or the coldest most self-center prick on the planet. At the moment I'm leaning towards thinking both.

I feel so sorry for Linde who is broken and Bam who I'm guessing will be. Ville I want to punch in the head.

Still loving the story so hardcore though. It's so elegantly written and poignant.

[oof_floof]

its not all ville's fault!!!

trust me, you'll see soon. *pats him gently*

*hugs* thanks for the comment darling. im really glad you like it.

[mildly_neurotic]

Since this story has been so complex so far I am sure you'll be able to swing things around to where Ville is sympathetic again.

At the moment he's really hard to like though.

*hugs back* All whining about Heartless!Ville aside, I really do like it. :-)

[elterriblefizzy]

Christ on a bike.

WOW.

Poor Lily.

poor poor poor Lily.

This story is amazing.

You're amazing.

:D