Smoking - Chapter 26

[heavenlyxflames]

Title:: Smoking
Genre:: Drama
Fandom:: RPS Vam, Villinde, Dugera, Lindunn, others.
Rating:: R
Summary:: A story, reaching back to the beginning like a twisted, curling whisp of smoke from a slow burning fire.
Disclaimer::Most characters are property only of themselves; I own the storyline and the writing. This is a work of ficiton; treat it as such

Comments

[bitter_light]

Valentine's Day has never been better. Thanks for the wonderful update.

(Well, maybe those two red roses have something to do with it as well, but the update is great too)

[snowisgreat]

What a lovely treat. :)

I like the Ville POV that you start out with 'cos it's good to see him being honest with himself for once, to see him admit both how self-obsessed he was as well as actually praising another person which doesn't seem to be something he's been into much until now. :)

Yeah, the entire story is just great... not much more to say right now other than I love it. :D (Duh!)

[midget666]

This is so beautifully written! And an update so soon! Yay! Great chapter! I loved it! Your stories are always so interesting!

[persianfire]

I've just caught up with this fic and it blows me away. I can't think of a single thing I dislike about it.

It's written beautifully with a steady pace, and I adore the shifting POVs and time changes.

It's written so well that these povs and time changes aren't confusing at all, each character is so distinctive that it's easy to tell who it is before the storyline tells you.

Ville and Linde's relationship is definitely my favourite part of the fic, from being childhood enemies to being friends, to being more.

I can't wait to see where you go with it, to find out everything that happened, yet a part of me doesn't want to know, doesn't want this fic to end or for the outcome to be something different to what i want it to be.

I've loved every chapter, and can't wait to read more!

[slasher48]

No story I've read before has ever had the capacity to tear me apart like this. I honestly have NO idea how I should feel about Ville.

*pets Bam* Game or not, love or not, Bam will eventually get hurt. The Ville you've illustrated prevents anything else.

And Linde...his heart will be broken just one more time. *hugs him*

*pokes you and smiles* Lovely.