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Smoking - Chapter 16

Dec 20, 2006 13:16

Title:: Smoking
Genre:: Drama
Fandom:: RPS Vam, Villinde, Dugera, Lindunn, others.
Rating:: R
Summary:: A story, reaching back to the beginning like a twisted, curling whisp of smoke from a slow burning fire.
Disclaimer::Most characters are property only of themselves; I own the storyline and the writing. This is a work of ficiton; treat it as such ( Read more... )

smoking, vam, story, fanfic

Comments 22

kay_lee_burn December 20 2006, 11:52:30 UTC

I swear to God i´ll comment 10 times, i´ll even open up different accounts and post even more comments! i´ll do everything just don´t make threats you´ll not post for ages! :)
this story is so refreshing in a way that you don´t rush anything and make us to really get to know each character. it´s like a big puzzle and with time every piece falls into his place.
yep.... i feel inspired to comment today...

oof_floof December 20 2006, 18:14:30 UTC

aww bless you sweetheart. <333

Go ahead, i like comments. ;) ahhaha no, im kidding. thank you though.

im glad you like it, really I am, and I'm very thankful for the comments. <333 *huggles*

mildly_neurotic December 20 2006, 19:11:01 UTC

I adore this story. I don't really like Ville in it, but it's rather interesting for the main character to be the antogonist. Anyway I love watching the threads of this story weaving themselves into one coherant tale.

I have no constructive criticisms, your writing is excellent, technically and creatively. IMO there are only a few slash authors that manage to be really good at both those aspects and you are one of them.

oof_floof December 23 2006, 12:34:10 UTC

Interesting you said that, I never really thought of him as the antagonist. I suppose he is. Asshole that he is.

Thank you very much darling, that was a very touching comment. I do try. ;) <33 *hugs and cuddles*

sweet_666_777 December 20 2006, 19:22:44 UTC

Why must I have to be walking out the door for work and not be able to read this? WHY?! Gah! I shall come back and read, and comment somewhat properly. :D

ilove_said_no December 20 2006, 20:52:08 UTC

oh. GOD. GODGODGOD!! That was so fucking hot. I just reread the entire story over again. More! Write more! I want VAM! I want Lindunn! GYEH!

oof_floof December 23 2006, 12:36:30 UTC

hahahahahha *tosses a bucket of water over you* DOWN GIRL, DOWN. hahha lmao.

bitter_light December 20 2006, 22:44:06 UTC

You amaze me every time.

Is it bad that I have a soft spot for this mean asshole Ville?

oof_floof December 23 2006, 12:38:21 UTC

Bless. <3

no, not bad at all, i love him too. ;)