Smoking - Chapter 12 & 13

[heavenlyxflames]

Title:: Smoking
Genre:: Drama
Fandom:: RPS Vam, Villinde, Dugera, Lindunn, others.
Rating:: R
Summary:: A story, reaching back to the beginning like a twisted, curling whisp of smoke from a slow burning fire.
Disclaimer::Most characters are property only of themselves; I own the storyline and the writing. This is a work of ficiton; treat it as such

Comments

[bitter_light]

Is it me or did LiveJournal just eat my comment? I was saying how much I love your story, your Bam, and you for posting. Good luck with the busy businesses, you're going to do great, I'm sure.

[oof_floof]

it ate it. :( *sniffles*

thanks love. i'm glad you like it. thanks for the comment anyways even though LJs a biatch. and thanks for the luck-wishing. <3 <3

[snowisgreat]

I said it before and I have to say it again: You get all my respect.
I really, really admire your writing, it's amazing.
The part about lies and being a liar was very well written, stuff like that can quickly become a cliché but you very skillfully avoided that. I love your story :D

And have a great trip, don't worry about the tunnel, it's not dangerous :)

[oof_floof]

*blushes* thank you very much, sweetheart.

i'm glad you likd the part about the lies. I was a bit worried it was too much, you know? Or too abstract. I'm glad it worked.

I'm also glad you like the story. *hugs*

yes, well, i guess I'll see when I'm in it. So scared ahha. Ugh tunnels. I hate them in cars under mountains enough. At least I know the mountain isn't going to collaspse and drown me. (well, i can be fairly sure, anyways)

[oanja]

I just love this story!
I had red like the first two chapters long time ago, but for some reason lost sight of this until now. And let me just say: wow...
You are an amazing writer and you make me feel like I should never try to touch my keyboard again trying to write something.
Good luck with your trip, I'm sure you'll get accepted. ^_^

[oof_floof]

i absolutely FORBID you to do that because i'm OBSESSED with your story about the camp, and need more like RIGHTNOWPLZ.

but thank you darling, and im so glad you like it. and thanks for the good wishes, i hope they come true but... well. its cambridge. it'd be a stretch for anyone, you know? <3 <3 *hugs*

[oanja]

lol. Thanks for saying that even though my stuff is horrible rubbish. ^_^

And I think you can get into any school you want and the fact that you are applying to Cambridge tells me that you have a real chance of getting in, cause nobody applies to schools they know they have no chance of getting into. (well except me... =/)

Oh I was wondering if I might add you to my friends? Pretty please? You seem like such an interesting person to know a bit better. ^_^

[oof_floof]

it is NOT rubbish. i don't read rubbish. really. im very picky about what i read. and i LOVE your story. haha.

thanks love. i.... i mean, i guess i have the grades, but its lucky for ANYONE to get into cambridge, so. I guess we'll see. (and im sure thats not true)

oh, please, by all means add me. :D I love new friends, and i've been meaning to add you for a while to do a bit of stalking myself. ;) <3 i warn you. i am a little bit unstable, very crazy, and prone to flooding flists with pointless posts. just so you know. ;)

[devils_almond]

Dammit, this is one of those stories that I have a hard time commenting on. I can't give any constructive criticism because there's nothing to be improved on to me. Everything feels like its written by someone who has spent their entire life understanding and sums it up so other people can go through life already knowing a lifetime's worth of knowledge. Shit, I'm rambling...

[oof_floof]

bless you. really. that's such a sweet comment. i think i know what you're trying to say. makes me feel warm and happy. and that i've succeeded; i didnt want this to be an airy fairy story about two people falling for each other, i was trying to go for the nity gritty parts of life that people dont really ... like to see. It's good to know that some of it is coming across. Thank you for reading, and thank you for commenting. It's good to know that people are reading and getting something out of it. Thanks. *hugs*

[mildly_neurotic]

It's just beautiful how you are slowly weaving the lives together. Even with all the angst what you write is eloquent. The part about liars was inspired.