Smoking - Chapter 6

[heavenlyxflames]

Title:: Smoking
Genre:: Drama
Fandom:: RPS Vam, Villinde, Dugera, Lindunn, others.
Rating:: R
Summary:: A story, reaching back to the beginning like a twisted, curling whisp of smoke from a slow burning fire.
Disclaimer::Most characters are property only of themselves; I own the storyline and the writing. This is a work of ficiton; treat it as such

Comments

[bitter_light]

As every chapter, this one is great. I'm glad you explained the time warp though, I don't think I would've understood it just like that.

Your characterizations of Ville and Linde are very stable and real, every action and thought corresponds with the nature of a) kids their age and b) their personalities and how you depicted them in earlier parts of the story. I'm impressed by your ability to keep this continuity in their characters while hopping to and fro on the time line.

That enough for a review? =P

[oof_floof]

hahaha. it was lovely. :P

thanks love. i really have fallen in love with my characters, i think. linde especially. normally, characterization really isnt my strong point, and I'm trying to work on that with this story. It's hard but I think I'm coming along. ;)

thanks for the review, again. ;) *hugs and vam cookies* Luff <3

[sweet_666_777]

I really have no clue what to say...there are no words to define how wonderful your writing is.

So...it was wonderful beyond words. o_O

[valorose]

*dies* That was just incredible, fantastic, left me pretty speechless for a fair while. wow just wow.

[anonymous]

hi love, i'm Mica. My mouse isn't working and I can change from Anonymous to my lj user xD

Well, this chapter was pure love, seriously. i can't can't can't wait till chapter 7! :D
Your writing is marvellous, and I think i'm falling in love with the story- and it has just started ♥

thank you as always *hugs*

[anonymous]

and of course, that 'can' was meant to be a 'can't'

loves you!

*fangirls*

[gothicwhite]

*unlurks* Wow. I was punted here by nemo_forever and she was absolutely right. You are an amazing writer. This story sucked me in and held me right through the last chapter, and I cannot wait to see what happens next.