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May 15, 2010 23:49

Title: One Year Later
Pairing: OnKey
Summary: Kibum sees Jinki again after one year
Genre: Angst
Author notes: Its my first time attempting Onkey one shot. I was inspired by One Year Later by Jessica and Onew, well, this is my favourite song and i totally love singing it. So yeah, comments (negative or positive) are totally loved. Blue words are ( Read more... )

fanfic: onew/key, yaoi

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fabricatedays May 15 2010, 16:18:19 UTC
its not crappy =X

this is so sad.
i wish Kibum took the leap of faith or something just to give Jinki another chance ):
I hope maybe there's a part two where happy ending prevails? I dont know.
but hey! awesome job for a first time alrights?!
:D

hwaiting ne! <3

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heavenlove May 15 2010, 16:48:16 UTC
ahh!
but compared to yours, mine is SUPER CRAPPY!

part two?
i will see first!
hheheheh, i probably would use another song to write another story.
thanks! =D

hope to see more onkey stories from you! =D

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cindyxmc May 15 2010, 17:28:42 UTC
i had tears in my eyes!
i'm such a crybaby! lol

i can't believe jinki did that to kibum
and now kibum doesn't even want to give jinki another chance.
i hope you have a sequel to this,
a happy one! haha cause i cannot stand a broken! onkey even though i love angst. =X

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heavenlove May 15 2010, 17:40:29 UTC
aww. *gives tissue*
i love angst too!
well, its my first time attempting one shot.
and its also my first time writing onkey stories.
sequel?
i will probably have one.
but i needa think!
hehehe, i will try my best to think of a sequel.
no promises though!
thanks for commenting!

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heavenlove May 15 2010, 17:45:53 UTC
aww, dont pout!
SMILEEEE! =D
angst is great!
i love angst!!!
hahhaahah, its crappy!
yeahh, its sad, i cried at my own work.
goshh.

yeahh, he realised his mistakes.
but kibum just wont forgive him so easily.
one year is too late!
sequel?
i will try my very best to think of one!
no promises though!
HAHAAHA!
i love you for commenting!
thanks for commenting!

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juphen May 15 2010, 17:45:09 UTC
whoa so sad
can't kibum give another chance? *but if i were kibum it's impossible*
it's jinki's fault

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heavenlove May 15 2010, 17:48:28 UTC
hey! =D
yeahh, its jinki's fault!
if i were kibum, i wouldnt forgive him either.
the promises jinki made to kibum.
TSK!
thanks for commenting!

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ringdingdong19 May 16 2010, 00:57:38 UTC
eeeeep....this is so sad TT TT
why does everyone trying to kill me with angst?!

even though, i'll admit jinki's a total asshole here..
but still, kibum shouldn't have walked away just like that...
uhh okaaay
this is not crappy okaaay!

hwaiting!
<333

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heavenlove May 16 2010, 02:07:19 UTC
hey!
angst is nice!

HAHAHAH!
if i was kibum, i wouldnt forgive him either!
there might be a sequel to it.
MIGHT!
i think its crappy. D=

thanks for commenting!

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