Comments | heavenisonfire: ❝when he's feeling brave you take his wine away❞

moirae in heavenisonfire

❝when he's feeling brave you take his wine away❞

Sep 21, 2010 22:54

unspoken | axis powers hetalia | 1200 words | denmark ; prussia ; england ; norway | pg-13 |
in which prussia, denmark, and england get drunk after a world meeting.
de-anoning from the kink meme.

( Though they spend so much time together, there is always much left unsaid between them. For instance, the word “pathetic” is strictly taboo, as are “love”, “miserable”, and “wretched.” And the most banned word of all? “Lonely.” )

✶character: denmark, ✦fanfiction, ✶character: norway, ✖kinkmem, ✶character: england, ❥pairing: denmark/norway, ✶character: prussia, ✤fandom: hetalia

Comments 18

fairywine September 22 2010, 06:50:42 UTC

This was beautiful, sad, and hopeful all at once. There was certainly a melancholy feel to it, but the end uplifted it enough I wasn't ready to hang myself out of depression. And I really, really love Norway making the first move-I feel the guy gets characterized as so passive he's borderline comatic way too often. I mean, Norge was a Viking too! He's got the fire in there somewhere.

Wonderful job~please, write more Nordics!

moirae September 25 2010, 13:58:05 UTC

Oh, yes, I definitely agree with you about Norway. He's either a complete doormat or passive-aggressive in a lot of fiction, and I don't particularly like either interpretation of him.

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! (:

yuki_lumino September 22 2010, 12:09:03 UTC

I have nede read nothing about this three. It was beautiful, I felt their loneliness and it was sad, but, eventually they had enough courage >w< (agh my english sux DX)

The Dennor part was reaaaally cute, I loved it X3

good one!

moirae September 25 2010, 13:58:28 UTC

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it! (:

lost_hitsu September 22 2010, 13:30:23 UTC

I have the original kink meme fill bookmarked and it's one of my favorites, good to know which talented user wrote it!

moirae September 25 2010, 14:00:42 UTC

Ahhh, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! (:

kiniski September 22 2010, 13:33:06 UTC

The heavy-heartedness of this was really well done. There's so much emotion behind the three and their drinking antics. And it was wonderful to see Norge help break that, at least for Denmark. As for the other two, I hope they had a happy ending.

“So…if the person you like knows you like them, they’ll make out with you?” Oh Prussia, maybe I don't want you to change. Ever. ♥

moirae September 25 2010, 15:28:02 UTC

I'd like to think that all three stories ended up somewhat happily. Because as much as I love my historical drama and angst, I like the idea that in the modern day the nations are relatively happier.

THank you for reading! (:

derivatizing September 22 2010, 14:17:12 UTC

This was so adorable and well written!

moirae September 25 2010, 15:28:16 UTC

Thank you! &hearts