❝he shall defend their home, and katyusha will preserve their love.❞

Dec 28, 2009 10:54

Title: a song about the grey eagle of the steppe
Series: Axis Powers Hetalia
Words: ~1500
Characters: ukraine-centric (russia/ukraine/belarus ; mentions of lithuania and poland)
Rating: PG
Warnings: slight tweaking of historical circumstances and characterization
Summary: Written for fayore for the spasibodedmoroz exchange. based off of the folksong “katyusha”; waiting ( Read more... )

✶character: ukraine, ✦fanfiction, ❥pairing: russia/ukraine, ✶character: belarus, ❥pairing: russia/belarus, ✶character: lithuania, ✖request, ✶character: poland, ❥pairing: ukraine/belarus, ✶character: russia, ✤fandom: hetalia

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tanya_tsuki December 28 2009, 19:06:58 UTC
This was lovely, it really was. Ukraine being the worried older sister, lost, and losing hope. Sad, but well written.

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moirae December 28 2009, 20:38:09 UTC
Thank you! &hearts

I could have so easily made this prompt about communism, but I didn't! /proud of self

I realized that it was getting a bit melancholy, so the very end was supposed to perk it up just a bit.

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perelka_l December 28 2009, 19:19:45 UTC
Uwah! That was so true, Polish-Lithuanian Union (I am using this name cuz' that's easier to write!)
I love that fick, great job!

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moirae December 28 2009, 20:38:30 UTC
Thank you! &hearts

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radittz December 28 2009, 20:57:53 UTC
Co było takie prawdziwe? XD Dla mnie wybielanie realcji stosunków między Rosją, Białorusią i Ukrainą, a oczernianie unii ma swoje granice lol

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radittz December 28 2009, 20:59:57 UTC
Maybe it's not very hostorically accurate in some parts, but really well-written - I wish there was more fanfiction about Ukraine - she's one of my favourite female characters :)

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moirae December 28 2009, 21:16:23 UTC
Thank you! I really like Ukraine, as well--actually, all of the females rank amongst my favorites. x)

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chromatic_coma December 29 2009, 02:33:06 UTC
You've got Ukraine down perfectly. The concerned older sister, always watching, waiting, and worrying, and almost in a sense helpless because her younger siblings are stronger.

This was so sad, but so perfect, it still makes me feel warm ♥

I love it when I have the perfect icon for a moment

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moirae December 29 2009, 03:09:46 UTC
I'm glad you think so! I'm always hesitant to write characters like her since, well...I don't relate to them much? So it could go so horribly wrong. But if you approve, I'm content. &hearts

I tried to make it optimistic in the end! I suppose I just fail at warm and fuzzy feelings, orz.

&hearts

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chromatic_coma December 29 2009, 04:12:15 UTC
If I approve? Certainly I'm not a modly power over moe characters (regardless of what everyone says about my apparently "astounding" ability to write them), and so you should not depend on my judgement.

You didn't fail; it did make me fuzzy. ♥

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kaite17 December 30 2009, 11:46:07 UTC
It's very cute =)
I like Ukraine character very much, but i think she is more strong than she is in Hetalia.
And about russian language - "Big sister" means "Старшая сестра" (Big=Older).

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