❝i want your love; i don't want to be friends❞
Title: a wedding dance
Series: Axis Powers Hetalia
Words: ~850
Characters: Hungary ; Prussia ; Austria (Prussia/Hungary/Austria)
Rating: PG
Warnings: kisses ; random style and capitilization
Summary: Written for peekaydee's birthday. Even though it’s Austria and Hungary’s wedding day, Prussia claims just once dance with the bride.
( she’s not quite sure what to make of all this. she didn’t even know that he was coming today, to her wedding. so what else can she do, but extend her hand towards him, and will her heart to stop fluttering as he takes it, and then places one hand on the small of her back? she can’t stop from leaning up to whisper in his ear. )
Series: Axis Powers Hetalia
Words: ~850
Characters: Hungary ; Prussia ; Austria (Prussia/Hungary/Austria)
Rating: PG
Warnings: kisses ; random style and capitilization
Summary: Written for peekaydee's birthday. Even though it’s Austria and Hungary’s wedding day, Prussia claims just once dance with the bride.
( she’s not quite sure what to make of all this. she didn’t even know that he was coming today, to her wedding. so what else can she do, but extend her hand towards him, and will her heart to stop fluttering as he takes it, and then places one hand on the small of her back? she can’t stop from leaning up to whisper in his ear. )
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laugh-worthy at times and then they also have a side of this jealousy, i feel, that comes out as well.
their dynamic is just high-lighted so well here.
WELL DONE. plus i love the lack of caps, i've been doing it and i'm like. you know. screw caps.
THAT SHIT'S FOR SCHOOL PAPERS.
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and yes, the hell with caps. /glares
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That was a really interesting choice: the lack of capital letters and having the conversations in italics at the end of each paragraph. Personally, I think that works for this story in a very aesthetic manner. And the last line...~ I love how it's ambiguous to who it goes to. The part where Prussia and Hungary talk about their past was a little frightening at first (jumping off a tower, OMG. O_O), but at least it worked out (if that's what it can be called...?).
I've often wondered about the wedding: Would Prussia be there or wouldn't he? Would either Austria or Hungary care if his presence was missed? This has just become one of my favorite interpretations so far.
Thank you for writing such a lovely fic! ♥
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Thanks for commenting!
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i love austria being all possesive and hungary being all troubled and prussia being all I KNOW WHAT I'M DOING SHUT UP jgfhkgk seriously thankyou so much ilu Hallie ;;
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you're so very welcome; happy bday again, dear &hearts
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