❝and in the annals of the empire, did it look this gray before the fall?❞

Dec 27, 2009 10:37

Title: Pride Goeth Before the Fall - Chapter One
Series: Axis Powers Hetalia
Words: 1,500
Characters: Turkey-centric (appearances by Egypt, Romano, Switzerland, and numerous Arab OC’s)
Rating: PG
Warnings: mentions of violence, some language, human names
Summary: Written for linguini for the holidays! The gradual decline and fall of the Ottoman Empire ( Read more... )

✦fanfiction, ✸wintergifts, ✶character: turkey, ✶character: switzerland, ✶character: egypt, ✶character: s. italy, ✽chapterfic: pride goeth, ✶character: oc, ✤fandom: hetalia

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chromatic_coma December 28 2009, 02:47:31 UTC
You write the most amazing Turkey ever ♥

I love this. For once the Italies aren't so useless (but it doesn't last long). Still, to start seeing Turkey in his moments of weakness is promising, and already his rage and violent nature was very well captured. I can't wait to see where this leads to and what's to come. <33

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moirae December 28 2009, 08:07:26 UTC
o///o
thank you &hearts

lol, poor useless italies. at least they had something of a success.

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chromatic_coma December 28 2009, 22:22:35 UTC
<3

exactly.

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moirae December 28 2009, 23:26:48 UTC
&hearts

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initials December 28 2009, 03:14:15 UTC
/SHRIEK

;A; You never fail me. OMG.

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moirae December 28 2009, 08:07:38 UTC
you like it? i'm so glad! &hearts

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initials December 28 2009, 23:20:39 UTC
/waits eagerly for the next chapter

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moirae December 28 2009, 23:26:38 UTC
tonight or tomorrow morning--i'm almost done with it. :D

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inquisitorial December 28 2009, 18:44:43 UTC
holy crap, TURKEY FIC. ♥!

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moirae December 28 2009, 20:58:53 UTC
sadly scarce, isn't it?

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inquisitorial December 28 2009, 21:03:56 UTC
I don't know why it is, Turkey is badass.

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moirae December 28 2009, 21:17:08 UTC
I know, he's like the most manly character ever.
Poor guy needs more love.

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pureraindrop December 29 2009, 04:26:16 UTC
So IC
--
Good thing you decided to focus of Sadiq's other possession aside from Greece and Egypt.
--

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moirae December 29 2009, 05:00:17 UTC
Thanks! :)

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le_chat_du_mars January 1 2010, 02:28:29 UTC
my god, this is so lovely. <3

i think might be in love with you.
(at the very least, can i friend you? :D?)

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moirae January 1 2010, 02:49:48 UTC
o///o

thank you so much! &hearts

and, sure! you're more than welcome to watch the comm or friend me if you'd like.

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