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moirae in heavenisonfire

❝a lone traveller walks on a quest to the stars❞

Oct 31, 2009 07:16

Title: The Elixir of Life
Series: Axis Powers Hetalia
Words: 1,850
Characters: China ; Hong Kong ; Taiwan ; Emperor Qin Shi Huang
Rating: PG
Warnings: n/a
Summary: Written for hetalia_contest’s week 019 prompt, “youth.” China’s young siblings refuse to go to bed unless he first tells them a story. And so, he recounts the tale of a young boy and his first ( Read more... )

✦fanfiction, ✶character: taiwan, ✶character: historical, ✶character: hong kong, ✖contest, ✶character: china, ✤fandom: hetalia

Comments 26

anoeldreamer October 31 2009, 14:41:07 UTC

Oh, how sweetly sad. I really liked it.

moirae October 31 2009, 14:52:38 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

nijibug October 31 2009, 15:57:46 UTC

That was utterly beautiful. Thank you for writing ♥

moirae October 31 2009, 16:16:44 UTC

Thank you do much for commenting! &hearts

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moirae October 31 2009, 20:25:42 UTC

Thanks a lot! I'm glad you liked it. :)

theos99 October 31 2009, 20:51:54 UTC

...WOW...

i love this story and i love how the spirits appear in the beginning.

you have a very good way of telling a story. :)

moirae October 31 2009, 21:15:05 UTC

Thank you so much! &hearts

I'm very glad that you liked it. :)

kuwarii October 31 2009, 20:53:39 UTC

Wow, I am usually not impressed by fanfics people write, but this one truly caught my attention. I loved the storytelling aspects of this and I think you portrayed Wang Yao/China very well.

Kudos!

moirae October 31 2009, 21:15:29 UTC

Wow, thank you. &hearts