❝i discovered that my castles stand on pillars of salt and pillars of sand❞

Sep 15, 2009 22:39

Title: To Rule the World
Series: Axis Powers Hetalia
Words: 1,400
Characters: Rome ; Ancient Greece ; Turkey ; Greece ; OC!: Byzantium
Rating: PG-16
Warnings: sexual references, violence
Summary: Written for hetalia_contest's week 013 prompt, "world is mine." The Empires of Greece, Rome, and Byzantium each rule the world in their turn; but what goes up must come ( Read more... )

✦fanfiction, ✖contest, ✶character: ancient greece, ✶character: turkey, ✶character: rome, ✶character: historical, ✶character: oc, ✤fandom: hetalia, ✶character: greece

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animaven September 16 2009, 08:50:54 UTC
What I like about this story, it brings history to life, makes it appealing without being pedantic.

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moirae September 20 2009, 00:31:42 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. &hearts

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chromatic_coma September 16 2009, 22:30:26 UTC
I think... I'm just going to drop out this week. *nodnod*

Brilliant. So freakin' brilliant, capturing all the Empires of the Mediterranean and how each was replaced by another, almost systematically. The language was beautiful, your OCs are amazing, and you really brought history to life.

The song is, once again, super appropriate (if I remember correctly, last time I pointed it out it was the same song. Still fits nicely~)

Your bias for Turkey is showing again XDDD

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moirae September 20 2009, 00:33:07 UTC
Aww, thank you so much, dear. &hearts
I'm actually getting a lot of inspiration these days because I'm aiding for my old AP Euro teacher, and listening in on his lectures a second time makes finding the patterns oh-too-easy.
They did Byzantium in class the day before I posted this.

SO? Is that a bad thing?

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chromatic_coma September 20 2009, 00:35:58 UTC
Ah, so that's it~ Maybe I should sit in on some AP World classes, or tutor some freshmen in it. That sounds like fun...

Never~

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moirae September 20 2009, 00:42:07 UTC
It's a goldmine of inspiration! XD

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ykyapril September 17 2009, 03:51:25 UTC
Oh oh oh >.< Turkey was scary~! I loved the addition of the OCs, and the history~! I feel like I know a lot more about the Mediterranean after reading your stories. :)

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moirae September 20 2009, 00:33:40 UTC
Thanks dear! I'm glad you enjoyed it! And learned something! ;)

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tanya_tsuki September 18 2009, 02:19:46 UTC
I love when history can create fics like this. Amazing <3

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moirae September 20 2009, 00:33:55 UTC
History is the best story there is! /bad pun

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pureraindrop October 22 2009, 22:07:51 UTC
Very cool.
How you were able to make Ancient Greece, Ancient Rome, and your OC's is amazing.
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