Part Deux!

[araeph]

TITLE:
The Bloody Corpse Lily Beckum

CULPRIT: The-BlAcKShEeP-Daughter

SUMMARY: Will has more family than people thought.what happens when he invits his cousin to his wedding and has her help save his lover from jail....oh and she's a pirate too.R&R please.SEQUEL NOW UP READ IT!

Best Line Dictionary Marathon:1. Davy gave his sinter smirk and

Comments

[justawench]

Her ship is called the "Bloody Corpse?" I can picture the Suethor now... "Hmm, I need a really threatening name for Sue's ship because she's exponentially like way more fierce than every other pirate that ever existed, ever. Wow, that nearly exhausted my naming abilities. I'll just call my character Lily Beckett - oops, that's already taken - Beckum."

I love how her only purpose (in these excerpts anyway) is to be redundant and a bitch. As everybody knows, nothing makes a man fall in love with you faster than you telling him to shove it up his arse.

[bizarreoptimism]

I really, really cannot tell you how much I enjoy your alternate endings. Jack's parting line makes me feel intensely sorry for someone -- the Suethor, I guess -- although I quite approve of him finishing off ANY Sue who is horrible enough to steal any of his possessions.

"In case you weren’t bowled over by Wednesday’s Sue, full of (woe) self-satisfaction as she was"

I have no idea why, but I really, really love that. XD

[sunshine304]

You're alternate endings are so liberating! :) And there's - can it be? - punctuation! And it doesn't seem particularly difficult to use, so... why doesn't the author?

[araeph]

*whines* 'Cause that would, like, take too much tiiiime! And it's much easier for me to bang out something on my own timetable than to try to please my readers!

[sunshine304]

Exactly! I mean, come on, who cares about readers?!

[darth_gojira]

Anyone else getting "Jason Skywalker" flashbacks?