The Family Business

Jan 21, 2013 22:12

Title:  The Family Business
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point of view: dean, author: fambiz

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quickreaver January 22 2013, 05:26:19 UTC
Coooool. The interesting thing about reading this 'verse is the little gems that get teased and then released to us. I wondered how Christa found out about The Family Business, about the demon blood relapse. Wonderfully answered.

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familybizness January 22 2013, 05:34:14 UTC
awesome, thanks!!

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iamthepasserby January 22 2013, 07:10:37 UTC
Doesn't think about it? DOESN'T THINK ABOUT IT?!

NO ONE CARES THAT THE DEMONS POISONED THE EFFING WATER SUPPLY?!!?! BULL!!!

DDDDD:

There's no way they just don't care why! WHAT THE HELL!

I LOVE SEEING INSIDE DEAN'S HEAD AND HIS HALF OF THE HELL ISSUES! MORE OF THIS! But holy crap, how can the water thing just not be resolved? *flops over and dies*

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heartverse January 22 2013, 14:13:03 UTC
Thaaaank you for saying this.

When we started heartverse Kira was like "well you should be the dean voice" and I felt the same way because me as dean to her sam is totally our dynamic BUT HER DEANVOICE IS SO FUCKING EPIC you know? So any time someone tells me I'm even sort of getting into his head in a way that works for them I just want to buy myself a pie or something.

AS FOR THE DEMON BLOOD - consider this halftime ;)

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iamthepasserby January 22 2013, 18:25:46 UTC
Nah, your Dean is on point, don't even worry. Buy yourself a pie. Make it apple....or strawberry....or pumpkin, mmmm....

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heartverse January 22 2013, 18:28:27 UTC
At some point we established that Dean likes pear pie, although I don't know if that's even a thing! I guess it could be.

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drcharleseppes January 22 2013, 23:40:25 UTC
God, I was hoping you would do this!

I did want to really love the part of Dean helping Christa and Kylie, but the fact that he left Sam for it - and then Sam wants to talk to him on the phone but a crisis breaks out - it broke my heart. I understand it, but it hurts.

At least Sam seems to understand it, too.

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shangrilada January 22 2013, 23:55:21 UTC
as the sam writer I can confirm that he understands it, lol.

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heartverse January 22 2013, 23:57:11 UTC
Yup, that is sort of Dean's conflict.

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sailoreyes67 January 26 2013, 03:52:41 UTC
ASHLKAHSLAHHOAHHAUHAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!

this is GREAT omg.

Long enough for the thing to get close. Long enough for it to stick out its tongue and breathe hot all up against his hand, and fuck, fuck, he knew they had a dog, and he’s breathing deep and hard the way he tells Sam to do but his ears are screaming and his chest is ripping open -

“Dean.”

- there are teeth all the way through him and he’s being dragged through the dark -

“Dean, honey.”

- lightning electricity and shrieky laughter and the dog is snarling snarling snarling -

There’s a small hand on his arm, a high quiet voice saying his brother’s name.

Sammy.

I JUST LOVE THE WAY THIS IS DONE OKAY

Her back’s wet against his hand, and then she’s screaming how hot she is, and he sprints for the bathtub and dunks her in, clothes and all, until she sputters and cries and reaches for him and he’s just seeing Sam Sam Sam the first time he ever gave the kid a bath, all bright eyes and need ( ... )

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heartverse January 26 2013, 04:33:27 UTC
I fucking adore you and this comment. Thank you so much.

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auroramama February 23 2013, 20:18:44 UTC
It’s just that Sam is the only thing he’s ever really loved.

And hasn't that been a barrel of fun? And yet. You don't decide who you're going to love.

They all break my heart. Sweetly.

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