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Fic: Fifteen Years

Oct 05, 2014 22:19

Title: Fifteen Years
Author: Mary (stillxmyxheart)
Beta: Lindsay (rowofstars)
Rating: G
Warnings: talk of abortion
Genre: Friendship, Family, Angst
Word Count: 3,387
Characters/Pairings: Eli, Hannah, Nicholas, Rachel, Ashley (Eli/Hannah, references to Eli/Ashley ( Read more... )

#future fic, character: ashley prescott, character: nicholas shaw, pairing: ashley/eli, character: hannah cole, *rating: g, !!ficverse: an eye for an eye, character: eli shaw, !fic, character: rachel shaw, pairing: eli/hannah

Comments 4

professor_spork October 8 2014, 04:06:54 UTC

The woman looks up again, and then stands, a bashful smile curving her lips as she approaches their table. "Hey, Eli."

i mean YES GOOD but knowing the Northern Vowels aren't happening somehow makes it slightly less fun

"That was the first girl I ever dated."
"You knew other girls before Mama?"

HDU ELI.

"Oh, yeah. Pretty sure when I die, Han's gonna be buried on one side of me, and Ben will be on the other, with his wife on his other side."

accurate

"Right from the front," Eli finishes, grinning as he looks at her. "Hair always in a ponytail, with those blue and white ribbons, just like the cheerleaders wore. My own personal cheering section."

I WANT ONE

"But then it started catching up to me. My guilt has gotten heavier and heavier, and even though I love Chase very much, there's a part of me that's still stuck on you, that can't move on, and it's keeping me from giving him my whole heart. I love him so much, but when I think about having kids with him, it's just - I think about that first one. I think about you, I think about ( ... )

stillxmyxheart October 8 2014, 04:16:36 UTC

i mean YES GOOD but knowing the Northern Vowels aren't happening somehow makes it slightly less fun
*sporfle*

HDU ELI.
Right? For Nicky, Han should have been the only girl on Eli's radar, ever, before they even knew each other.

I WANT ONE
who doesn't?

ELI THAT'S NOT WHAT YOU LEAD WITH
Dude, there's no way that wasn't going to be the first thing out of his mouth.

and disgust, don't forget disgust!
That too XD

electrik_twist October 9 2014, 14:41:25 UTC

-glares at LJ-

I seriously just. Ashleyyy. This affected me just like I thought it would. That kiss blindsighted me though! I realize this is a complicated situation but I just. :(

stillxmyxheart October 9 2014, 19:15:36 UTC

Yeah, I mean... Eli would obviously never intentionally cheat on Hannah, but it was like... seeing Ashley again, someone who was once very important and very special to him, and the setting, not just where he grew up, but being on the baseball field, sitting on the bleachers with her, something they probably did so much when they were dating in high school, combined with her being so upset, his mind sort of just took him back and he got caught up in the moment.

Hannah was a little "wtf?" when he told her, but she really wasn't angry after he told her what all happened.