Fic: The First Step (Part 2)

Nov 09, 2011 11:13

Title: The First Step (Part 2)
Authors/Betas: Mary (stillxmyxheart), Lindsay (rowofstars)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst, Drama
Warnings: References to sexual assault
Word Count: 8,265
Characters/Pairings: Hannah, Juliet, David, John (David/Juliet)

Hannah looked up from her laptop at the sound of the doorbell. )

character: john mckenzie, #future fic, pairing: david/juliet, character: hannah cole, !!ficverse: an eye for an eye, character: david cole, !fic, *rating: pg-13, character: juliet grayson

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samajama224 November 9 2011, 21:21:33 UTC
grinning when she saw two pints of ice cream
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAHH.

Hannah smirked. "Was the bird shaped like Dad?"
Juliet looked up towards the ceiling and shrugged. "Vaguely."
Bahaha. That's presh. *TUGGLES smartass!Han&Jules*

Blurting out to Madison that Eddie had tried to rape her had felt good at the time, but after seeing how it affected her friend, and how Madison had looked at her afterwards, she regretted it. In that instant she was a victim again, and it made her feel powerless.
But this is Mama!Jules. She knows how to react. IT'LL BE FINE. JUST LET IT ALL OUT, BB.

"It's okay, sweetie, we know you tried. You're strong, and you fought him, and I am so proud of you for that."
See? Mama is proud of you. PROUD. WEEPING.

Hannah was curled up beside her, with her head on Juliet's thigh and her hand resting on the older woman's knee.
OH GOD. MORE WEEPING. TOO MUCH. PRESH. CAN'T.

Before he could speak or ask what had transpired while he was helping Harry make nice with administrators from the DEA, ATF and ( ... )

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stillxmyxheart November 9 2011, 21:27:59 UTC
But this is Mama!Jules. She knows how to react.
YES. Jules always knows what to do.

Just because he didn't rape her, doesn't mean he didn't TRY. Duh.
Yeah, but you know David, he's just focusing on the worst case scenario here.

*eyes* You should fix that.
*dies* MY BAD, I FIXED IT XD

WE MADE OURSELVES FEEL ALL THE FEELINGS, IT'S OKAY.

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professor_spork November 9 2011, 21:34:45 UTC
Hannah laughed and nodded, watching as Juliet picked up the cookies and tucked them in one of the upper cabinets, her dad's favorite not-so-secret hiding place. The simple act gave her such a warm, comforting feeling that a moment later she was walking around the end of the counter to wrap the other woman in a tight hug.

EVEN HANNAH IS CHARMED BY HOW CHARMINGLY DOMESTIC THEY ARE.

"So, a little bird told me John asked you to be his teaching assistant next semester."
Hannah smirked. "Was the bird shaped like Dad?"
Juliet looked up towards the ceiling and shrugged. "Vaguely."

<333333

really hot guys on really hot space ships

ALWAYS CHOOSE THIS OPTION

Before he could speak or ask what had transpired while he was helping Harry make nice with administrators from the DEA, ATF and Treasury Department, Juliet had wrapped her arms around him. He was surprised, and it took until she squeezed him a little for him put his arms around her shoulders and hug her back.

GET WITH THE PROGRAM DAVID HUGS ARE HAPPENING.

She looked exhausted, her ( ... )

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stillxmyxheart November 9 2011, 21:38:23 UTC
EVEN HANNAH IS CHARMED BY HOW CHARMINGLY DOMESTIC THEY ARE.
HANNAH SHIPPED THEM BEFORE IT WAS COOL.

YOU KNOW ACTUALLY SAYING THAT ALOUD WOULDN'T BE REMISS.
GIVE HIM TIME.

That'll fix it.
*pets David*

Damn it Juliet we're going to have to start colonizing other planets to make room for all of your awards.
They are starting to pile up, aren't they?

In summary: ;OARGHUAEKGHJAEHTAERGU
I TAKE IT THIS IS GENERALLY FAVORABLE?

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dance_the_dance November 10 2011, 07:59:10 UTC
"Hey," she said, setting her dinner down on the table and resting her hand on Hannah's shoulder. After a beat, Hannah looked up, meeting her eyes. "There's nowhere else I'd rather be tonight than hanging out with you. Even if your dad wasn't working late, even if nothing had happened to you."
How is Juliet so awesome, and how lucky is Hannah to have her? ♥

The credits were rolling on the end of first one, a fairly short action flick that they agreed took itself way too seriously, when Juliet said, "Was it just me or did the second guy at the bank remind you way too much of Chris?"

Hannah laughed and nodded. "Yeah, a little," she agreed, and then added, "And now that you've said it, I won't be able to unsee it."
LOL, what movie is that? xD

Anger flared in Juliet and she stepped towards David, stabbing a finger at his chest. "There is a big difference between me telling you Hannah's got her period, or that she's having body image issues because her boobs are smaller than the other girls', and telling you about the single most ( ... )

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stillxmyxheart November 10 2011, 08:09:04 UTC
How is Juliet so awesome, and how lucky is Hannah to have her?
She's just Jules, man, but Han is so lucky.

LOL, what movie is that? xD
IDK, braintwin wrote that section XD

And she keeps getting EVEN MORE AWESOME.
I KNOW. Like Leah said, Jules needs another planet for all of her awards.

He's like the most supportive person EVER and he still thinks he could be better?
He really is, but this is beyond the scope of anything he's ever had to deal with personally, so it's a bigger struggle for him than Han's issues with her mom, or her breaking up with Seth. He's only ever dealt with something like this on a professional, detached level, and he wants to make sure he's helping, and not hindering, in Han's recovery, and make sure he relates to her as her father, and not as an FBI agent.

So do I XD And yeah, Han's got a really great support system. We've talked about scenarios, like if she was still dating Seth, that don't go as well XD

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dance_the_dance November 10 2011, 08:35:08 UTC
He really is, but this is beyond the scope of anything he's ever had to deal with personally, so it's a bigger struggle for him than Han's issues with her mom, or her breaking up with Seth. He's only ever dealt with something like this on a professional, detached level, and he wants to make sure he's helping, and not hindering, in Han's recovery, and make sure he relates to her as her father, and not as an FBI agent.
I know, but the fact that he even realizes that, and that he wants to be even MORE helpful and supportive... TOO AWESOME FOR WORDS. ♥

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stillxmyxheart November 10 2011, 08:38:25 UTC
I THINK DAVID DESERVES SOME AWARDS TOO.

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happyfew November 11 2011, 15:24:18 UTC
MY HEART
MY HEART

MAMA!JUUUUULES

She set the bag on the counter, grinning when she saw two pints of ice cream, Rocky Road, which was Juliet's favorite, and Cookie Dough, which was hers Excellent taste in ice cream, ladies.

The simple act gave her such a warm, comforting feeling that a moment later she was walking around the end of the counter to wrap the other woman in a tight hug. <33333

Juliet rubbed her hand up and down Hannah's arm, giving her a light squeeze and dropping a kiss on the top of her head. "It's okay, sweetie, we know you tried. You're strong, and you fought him, and I am so proud of you for that." TAUGHT WELL

Sigh, I feel myself falling more in love with Chris.
And he wasn't even in this fic. Whatever.

Hannah was curled up beside her, with her head on Juliet's thigh and her hand resting on the older woman's knee. THIS IMAGE, MY HEEEEEEART.

Juliet could see a couple of agents poking their heads over and around their cubicles to look down the corridor Waiting for the tension to be resolved, them pervs I MEAN ( ... )

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stillxmyxheart November 11 2011, 15:57:34 UTC
TAUGHT WELL
INDEED.

Sigh, I feel myself falling more in love with Chris.
And he wasn't even in this fic. Whatever.
It's all good. You should go read my headcanon for him, you'll probably fall even more in love XD

THIS IMAGE, MY HEEEEEEART.
I KNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW.

*attempts not to ship it*
Don't fight your urges XD

THANK YOU SO MUCH, BB ♥

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stillxmyxheart January 1 2012, 06:56:12 UTC
YOU ARE CLOSE SHE WILL OPEN UP TO YOU IN TIME.
The thing is, there are some things David never really finds out about, like what exactly went down during that almost moment in the basement, because she doesn't want to talk about that with him. Some stuff she tells him about, like when she tried to escape, but some of it he just only has vague hints on, and he's going to have to learn to deal with that. The only person who truly knows everything about what happened is (eventually) Eli.

JOHN! *TACKLES AND HUGS* FINALLY SOME GOOD THINGS WITH HIM!
I TOLD YOU.

ALL THE FEELINGS. WE HAVE THEM TOO. IT'S ALL GOOD.

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stillxmyxheart January 1 2012, 07:10:43 UTC
Honestly, I am not that surprised about that. I can see that and understand it.
*nod nod* Since she and Eli are obviously going to be intimate, he needs to know about the things that might trigger her, or make her uncomfortable. It's something that really brings them closer together, Han telling him everything, because it means she trusts him not to judge her, and to keep her secrets, and take care of her.

I WANTS MORE!
THERE WILL BE MORE. I PROMISE.

GROUP HUG?

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