FIC: May I Have This Dance (Charles/Pickles; R) +BONUS poem: Transcendental (Charles/Pickles; PG13)

[misdreya]

Title: May I Have This Dance?
To: Matsunaga
From: gossamerstarsxx
Beta: ladyelwen
Characters/Pairings: Dethklok and Charles Ofdensen; Charles/Pickles; implied past Tony/Pickles.
Timeline: Post-Renovationklok.
Rating: R.
Warnings: Language, including the Lord’s-name-in-vain variety. References to sex. References to drug abuse.
Notes: I took a bit of

Comments

[nugatorytm]

Aw, Charlie. The messes you get into, just so you can have a date with Pickles. I think you'd better take Pickles' advice and get lessons from him from now on.

[lovelydiesel]

There was just so many things i really loved about this story.
-i loved how real pickles feelings of bettrayal came across and how he couldnt get over it.
-how he just got charles back only to be too upset to stay with him and dumping his locket and running
-how pickles would give in with charles when he was drunk or high
-charles in his regular jackoff-i-can't-help-being-hot clothes
-the skwiss/toki squint where he was watching over him from the bar but kept checking in and was off like a rocket like'who the hell are speaking in norwegian too?' (really loved the way you wrote that part in so subtly)
-just the whole learning to dance story-i died- just died poor charles and his poor ego after that lol
-pickles' whole timelime wrapup of finally getting how hard charles tries for him,the boys and dethklok
,,, i wish someone would make a pic of them dancing. i'd love to see it

[zsomeone]

Skwisgaar praire dogging on Toki was the cutest thing.

Charles accidently getting a job at a gay fettish club was awesome. I bet he learned some interestign moves though...

[supes_]

the poem-- frak. it was perfect, and it broke my heart, and just... yes. yes. it just expressed everything so well, both for pickles and for the band. write more dethklok poetry, please?

the fic itself was lovely too. thanks for the warm fuzzy feeling. :)