Comments | hearts_and_guts: FIC: Negative One - Forty-Seven (Nathan/Pickles, Nathan/Pickles/Skwisgaar; NC-17)

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FIC: Negative One - Forty-Seven (Nathan/Pickles, Nathan/Pickles/Skwisgaar; NC-17)

Feb 22, 2011 17:16

TO: the_ginga
FROM: skwisguarded

Title: Negative One - Forty-Seven
Pairing: Nathan/Pickles, Nathan/Pickles/Skwisgaar
Rating: NC-17
Timeline: Occurs during and after Dethsiduals.
Warnings: Booze, drugs, sex.

( It was fucking hard to feel anything but anger around Murderface. )

gifts: nathan/pickles, gifts: *fic, gifts: *rated nc-17, gifts: nathan/pickles/skwisgaar, made by skwisguarded, made for the_ginga

Comments 9

skwisguarded February 22 2011, 23:32:11 UTC

Interesting but good format, and I lvoe the ending.

nugatorytm February 23 2011, 01:45:53 UTC

You know, that episode focused so much on Murderface and Toki, it was nice to see what could have happened "behind the scenes."

Great job with this, mystery writer!

misdreya February 23 2011, 05:45:48 UTC

I definitely agree with Skwisguarded, the format really made this fic. Not only is it amazing writing, but it added another level when I realized what the numbers were about. :D

Mystery Writer, can I pretend this is mine as well? XD

nawazarrio February 23 2011, 10:04:11 UTC

*dies of awesome OD*

herbailiwick February 23 2011, 16:58:49 UTC

Two things that I just LOVED OMG:

1) "Nathan did that thing he'd always done where he froze and didn't let you go"

2) "coiled like a cinnamon bun"

herbailiwick February 23 2011, 16:59:43 UTC

OH! Someone above said they realized the numbers. Is it tracks? lol

herbailiwick March 3 2011, 14:39:29 UTC

Also, I really enjoyed the look at What We Didn't See in Dethsiduals. I did want to see more of these three palling around without their brutality (Toki and Murderface) getting in the way. Interesting goings-on to be sure, especially if they were porny. :-D