Comments | hearts_and_guts: FIC: Be Mine (Toki/Skwisgaar, NC-17)

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FIC: Be Mine (Toki/Skwisgaar, NC-17)

Feb 08, 2011 18:41

TO: snartha
FROM: gossamerstarsxx

Title: Be Mine
Characters/Pairings: Skwisgaar x Toki.
Timeline: Unspecified.
Rating: XXX
Warnings: Drugs and explicit sexual content.
Notes: Toki and Skwisgaar are speaking their native languages throughout the text.

( It was four o’clock in the morning... )

gifts: *fic, gifts: *rated nc-17, gifts: toki/skwisgaar, made for snartha, made by gossamerstarsxx

Comments 12

zsomeone February 9 2011, 02:01:17 UTC

YES.
Holy shit this was hot and sweet and everything else, fucking good job!

I'm gonna have to come back later and read it again.

pixiestixgirl February 9 2011, 04:42:46 UTC

Ditto!

herbailiwick February 9 2011, 05:40:36 UTC

- forgetting, in his need, that any such thing as pride existed
- a moan from the blond beneath him that Toki would always relish
- Toki groaned, tangling his hands into his own hair
- stoner fuck buddies
^ All of these lines.

This fic was so hot. And you understand Skwisgaar in a way a lot of people don't, which really impresses me! Very sweet, very believable.

OH AND DID I MENTION FUCKING HOT?!!? Nice work!

herbailiwick February 14 2011, 19:44:51 UTC

"And you understand Skwisgaar in a way a lot of people don't, which really impresses me!"

this makes mysterious author very happy! thanks :)

deth_pinion February 9 2011, 05:52:54 UTC

DAMN THIS WAS AWESOME.

I love when the speak with their silly accents, but I think it's really cool when they are able to express themselves a little better in their native tongues.

My bunk. I'll be in it. For the rest of the night.

skwisguarded February 9 2011, 10:03:20 UTC

I like when seemingly-PWP fics end up with surprise plot that was there all along but you didn't notice it because of the hot sex. So, er... I like this fic.

eevee_baby February 9 2011, 17:58:22 UTC

I want to start with thank you to Snartha for requesting s/t, and a huge thanks to the author for writing this. Which brings me to:

DEAR GOD. This is so fucking hot and sexy and ughgggnfnfnf I can't control myself. I agree, the no accent thing makes it soooo much hotter and...personal? Author, you HAVE to write more s/t. That's an order.

eevee_baby February 9 2011, 20:20:15 UTC

you got it. :D

thanks guys!